假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last Saturday I went to the library as usually. At about noon, I was enjoying my reading near a lake while suddenly I hear someone crying for help. I went up to see what was happened I was shocking to find a little child struggling in the water in the distance while many peoples were standing by without doing anything. Without any hesitation, I had pushed through the crowd as I took off my coat, but jumped into the water quickly. I managed to reach him and carried him back to safety. To his great relief, the kid was saved.
I was proud what I had done. I hope everyone can give a hand when someone else is in need.
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（／）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Mrs．Brown was an old lady with just one son who lived far 71．
away from her. On her 80th birthday, she was sure that even if 72．
her daughter could not come for a visit, but she would at least 73．
receive a present to her daughter．After all, eighty was a special 74．
birthday, one should not be forgotten．The old lady waited so 75．
eager that she stood at the front door for a whole day．Her 76．
daughter didn't show up．However, the old lady got the parcel 77．
in which there were a printed card along with a cheque．She 78．
felt very disappointed and she tears the cheque into pieces． 79．
Everyone but a caring daughter or son could write a cheque． 80．
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Our class recently has had a heated discussion about if the historic old buildings should be tear down. Opinions varies from one to another. Some students support the protection of those buildings so they are carriers of history through which the future generations can deep understand the development of our city. Beside, the historic old buildings can also arouse people’s love for the city.
In the contrary, some other students think that the old buildings may hold back the development of economy and the process of modernization. It may affect the beauty of the city.
As far I’m concerned, I approve of the former opinion. But if a building is worth of little, it may be proper to demolish(摧毁) it and make better use of that area. We should just weight the advantages and disadvantages.
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
In order to realize his dream, Bill Gates, richest man in the world, gave in studying in
Harvard University, that is the most famous in the world. He set up a company and researching
The computer software. An old saying goes, Interest is the best teacher. I quite agree with this
idea. I began to be crazy about English when I was a little girl. I got particular interested in
foreign cultures or customs. To meet us curiosity, I read English stories every day. It seemed to be
the best “meal” of a day. As for a result, I always did very well in English exam. Interest is the
key to succeed.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My summer travel started terribly .I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket to Hang Zhou. I was going to visit a friend here and after that I would go to Xiamen for long holiday. I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag from the floor and then I realized that someone had stolen it.Luckily I had all my money on my pocket,but the only clothes I had was those I had on.It felt very strange to travel without any luggages.When I finally arrived at my friend he lent to me lots of clothes. I feel very happy that I could change my clothes at last.
下面这篇短文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线 （﹨）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I believe that everyone in the world loves their mother. So am
I. My
mother is a ordinary teacher. She works hard at school, just as other
mothers do every day. In fact, she isn’t good health. She have been suffering
from arthritis(关节炎) for many years. In spite of this, she never stops
working or giving up hope. I still remember the day and when my mother
received a card of congratulations for Teacher’s Day from her director. The
card was read “Thank you for your hard works; Happy Teacher’s Day to
you!” At that moment, I was so moving that tears came to my eyes. I am
proud of my mother because she is my best teacher as good as my mother.
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Although he is one of China’s famous scientists, but Yuan Longping consider himself a farmer. Indeed, his sunburnt face and arms and slim, strongly body are just like those of millions of Chinese farmers, for them he has struggled for the past five decades. He grows who is called super hybrid rice or became the first agricultural pioneer in world in 1974. Spending money on himself or lead a comfortable life means very little to him. The reason is because he believes a person with too many money has more rather than fewer troubles.
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
This morning I went to ask for my English teacher to give me some advice on why to learn English well on the weekend. When I arrived his office at 8 o’clock, he had already done her work for almost one hour. First, we should make a plan of study and carry them out until we succeed. Then, we must master any basic knowledge of English such as 26 letters and 48 sounds. Vocabulary is bricks and grammar is bones. We can make different kinds of phrases and sentences with them according the rules. Finally, practice make perfect. When I leave, it was 12 o’clock. Through this lesson, I learned something which couldn’t be learned from textbooks.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误， 每句最多有两处错误，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1.没处错误及修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第十一处起）不计分。
One day, did not feeling well, Mr, Smith went to the hospital to have him examined．When he was given the test paper, he greatly shocked．“Am I dying?” He immediately feels very sick． Filled with sadness, he went back home, taking a lot of pills and even wrote his will．“Maybe a doctor made a mistake”, Mr． Smith thought and went to the hospital to have other examination．To his great joy, the doctor really made a mistake but he didn’t have cancer in all! Again, the whole world seemed beautiful．Mr.Smith went out for his most favourite sport happily .
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）。并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
Nowadays, as the development of the Internet, there is a kind of language calling Web Language．Some people even speak Chinese mixed with English letters．Recently our class have had a discussion about if we should welcome the Web Language．
40％ of the students think it ridiculous．In their opinions, it does no good to help people communicate, nor is it useful for learning English, Besides, it’ll make Chinese more standard and pure, finally ruining our mother tongue．
However, 60% of our class is fond of it．They think it is simple, convenient and helpful in expressing them．What’s more, it may make the language more interesting．
Personally, it’s not good habit to use the Web Language．It may be popular, but you may also make yourself be misunderstood．
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符合(^)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
修改：在错的词下划—横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.至允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Over a year ago, my friend was ready to return after complete his tour in Singapore. He didn’t expect that he was about to get on his airplane when he stopped politely by one of the worker of the airport. He was told that he was not allowed to aboard. My friend had thought that there must be anything wrong with his ticket. The worker told him that was not his ticket but the book he hadn’t return to, which he had borrowed from a library, that caused the trouble. Certainly, my friend didn’t board but missed the flight. He wasn’t permitted to take the flight home a week late until he returned the book to the library.
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
One day I hurried home for lunch after school because of there would be an exam in the afternoon. I expected get back early to prepare for the exam. But when I got home, the lunches was not ready yet. I am unhappy. When the dishes were served, I found none what I liked. I ran out of the house angry, and then walking in the street for a while. When I got into the room, I saw the lunch box on my desk. One classmate told me my mother had brought them for me. Before opening the box, I found my favorite food inside. My eyes quickly filled with tears.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在此处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一个横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从十一处起）不计分。
We receive your application last week. We regret to inform you that our company has hired a boy calling Tonny the job of the manager assistant. Having studied your certificate careful，we decided that we should need someone with more office experiences for this particular position. You have impressed them with your desire to learn and your ability to work hard, but we do hope that you will apply for a position in our company sometime in the future. We would like to thank you on your being interested in our company. Please to contact us if there is any further questions.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文， 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有十处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（＾），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处， 多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Most of the Chinese people think the family with one child is more better than the one with more than one child. For a thing, they want to build a successful career but have few time to bring up more than one child; for other thing, raise only one child they can afford better education for him. But others think this is better to have a big family. They think more children they raise, the better their life will be when they grow old. In my opinions, it's enough for a family to have one child, or population expansion will contribute to a series of problem.
此题要求改正所给短文中的10处错误。请在右边横线上写出改正后的词。包括：多词，缺词和错词。
Dear Editor,
Recently, my classmates have had a heated discussion about that
we should have optional courses in high schools. Some students were
in favor of optional courses. They say interest is best teacher
and our spare time will be colorful and meaningful. Students
can not only enlarge their knowledges but also improve their abilities.
However, others are against the idea, said that optional courses
will take up too much time as well as energy. In addition to, some optional
courses have something to do with the College Entrance Examination. They
are afraid they’ll fall behind their classmates if they will take the
optional courses. I’d like to take one or two of the optional courses, which, I think, will certain benefit me a lot.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
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