假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2、只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Mr. Johnson,
I’ve learned from a newspaper that some clerks are wanting in your company. I am eager to being one of them. So I am writing the letter. My name is zhang Hua. I was born in the Hebei Province and I am in good health. I’ve just graduated in the Computer Department of Wuhan University. I did very good in all subjects and I am especial good at computer studies and English. I can read science books in English and doing some writing in English as well.
Beside, I know a little French. And in my spare time, I enjoy playing basketball. As is said that your company is very famous and I’ll very glad if you let me work for it. My telephone number is 027-89276628.I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
下面短文中有10处语法错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从11处起)不计分。
Once upon a time there was a boy who fond of reading. However, he was very poor to buy any books. That was the reason that he had to borrow books from a rich man who owned a lot of books. The boy knew clearly that he has to finish reading the books he had borrowed them and return them to the owner as soon as possible. A rich man, who was ready to lend any of his book to the boy, read few of his own books. With time going on, the boy read a lots but finally became a famous writer in his time. Though the rich man had so many books, he remained a man with little knowledge because of he seldom read his books.
文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(^),并在此符号下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As is known to all that our students of today have to fix our attention on our lessons, so we know few
of society. A holiday is the best time and the best chance to make up for that. Take a part-time job is a
good form of social practice. That we have learned in books and in class can’t have same important
effect on us as what we have learned through personal practice. In social practice, we can surely make
a progress in both knowledge or practical ability. Beside, when we take a part-time job, we may got
paid more or less to help our family. Thus, I will say a senior school student should take a part-time
job in his/her holiday, if possible.
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误,对标有题号的每一行作出判断;如无错误,在该行右边横线上画上一个勾(√);如有错误(每行只有一个错误),则按下列情况改正;
此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。
此行少一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),在该行右边横线写出该加的词。
此行错一个词: 在错的词下面画一横线,在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意:原行没有错的不要改。
Before lunch Allen happened to see a man fished in
___________
a ditch about five metre outside a bar. Allen stopped
___________
curiously. All people passing over the man who was fishing
___________
regarded him like a foolish man. Allen’s heart went out
___________
of him. He said kindly to fish-catcher, “Hello, will
___________
you please do me a favor and have a drink with me
___________
in the bar?” The man gladly received his invitation.
___________
After buying the man several cups soft-drinks,
___________
Allen asked, “You are fishing there, right? May I
___________
know how much fish you have caught this morning?”
___________
“You are the number 8,” said the man humorously.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出改正后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Mum,
I’m considering work in Africa next year when I graduate. I will teach the English
in a village school in Zimbabwe, which is the southern part of Africa. There many adults
received few education when they were young but they want our kids to be well-educated.
There I won’t get paid very much and I don’t mind. I’m not interesting in being rich.
I just want to do something what will help people who are not so luckily as me. When I
come home again, I’m going to get a job as a teacher. Whatever I do, I wanted a job where
I can work with kids.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符合(^),在该词下面写出该加的词。
修改:在错的词下划—横线,在该词下面写出改正后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
第四部分:
第一节:
Last Saturday the students of our class made a bike trip of a
small town .We set off earlier in the morning.
After getting to the town, we had visited some places of interest. At noon,
we had picnic near the town. Everybody was attracted by the beautifully scenery
and we took a lot of picture there. In the afternoon, some of us went fishing,
some rowed boats on the water, but others flew kites.
We both had a wonderful time! It was a pleasant trip for us,
during which the boys were offered the girls a lot of help.
We have learned to help, understand and sharing with others.
In a word, we have got quite a lot from it.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改l0处,多者(从第ll处起)不计分。
Modern technology takes us a lot of convenience, especially when it came to the Internet. You can find all kinds messages in just a few minutes on the Internet. It’s like going to a huge library without have to walk around ti find your books. Therefore,recently many people have been discussing the dangers of the Internet.There have been reports in the America about some people trying to steal others personal information for bad purposes. Finding information on the Net is easy,but not all information are good to society. For example ,you can find such information on how to kill people,how to break into a bank, many things like that.I’m afraid the problem will becomoe more seriously in the future.
短文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改l0处,多者(从第ll处起)不计分。
Swmming is very popular.People like it in summer because water makes people feeling cool.But if you swim in a wrong place,it may not be safely.Last year,a lot of people died when enjoy thrmselves in water,most of them were students.Nowadays,some people are not careful enough
in swimming.They often think they swim too well that nothing will happen on them in water.Don’t forget:better swimmers died in water.They die not because they were not good swimmer,but because they were not careful.So don’t get into the water when you are alone.If you see“No
swimming”,don’t get into water.Unless you remember that,swimming will be safe.
Dear Lihua,
I’m very glad to have received a letter you sent me ______________
two weeks ago. I had been thinking about the question you ______________
asked me. In my opinion, you should come back before ______________
you finish your studies abroad. For one reason, which you ______________
are studying is badly needed nowadays in China. That will ______________
be pretty easy for you to find a good work. In fact, I know a ______________
few big companies in one city is hoping to hire people _____________
like you. For other reason, I think it will be more convenient ______________
for you to look after your parents as they are getting old. _______________
Therefore, I think it’s a good idea for you to return back. _______________
Best wishes!
Minghua
英语课上,老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下便条为你同桌所写,请你对其进行修改。便条中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(^),并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
3.必须按答题要求做题,否则不给分。
When I was in high school, most of my friend had bicycles. I hoped I could also have it. One day I saw a second-hand bicycle, that was only one hundred yuan. I asked my father the money. But he said he could only give me half of the money. He should find the other half myself. So I went to sell newspapers after the school. My father was pleased if I showed him the money a month late. He gives me the other fifty. You can imagine how much happy I was when I rode to school on my own bicycle.
此题要求改正所给文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断:如无错误,在该行右边的橫线上划一个勾(√);如有错误(每行只有一个错误),则按下列情况改正。此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉,在该行右边的橫线上写出该词,并也用橫线划掉。此行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),在该行的右橫线上写出该词。此行错一个词:在错的词下划一橫线,在该行右边橫线上写出改正后的词。
注意:原行没有错的不要改。
They day before the speech contest(比赛) English teacher ____________
talked to me . She said that she and my schoolmate all ____________
wished me success , but it didn't matter that I would ____________
win or not . When I was on the stage the next day , I felt so ___________
nervous as I shook like a leaf . There were so many people ___________
present! Suddenly , I caught a sight of my English teacher in ___________
the crowd . She was smiling but nodding at me. I remembered __________
her words and calm down . I did a good job and won the first __________
prize . Now my picture and the prize is hanging in the library. ___________
Whenever I see them I will seldom think of my English teacher. __________
When we got up in the morning every day, we start our daily____________
routine: washing our faces, brushing our teeth and maybe take a bath.____________
When you do this, do you ever think that there is enough water or not?____________
One thirds of the 4.4 billion people in the developing world____________
has no way to clean drinking water. Water-related diseases kill____________
10,000 to 20,000 children every day in the developed world. ____________
What comes to our minds when we read these numbers? ___________
Do you think we are lucky or not? In a fact, the outlook for the____________
future, even for us, is not very bright.
So let us value our water as much as possibly not only for___________
ourselves, but also to our children. ____________
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。短文中有10处错误,每句最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(),并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词。
2、只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear editor,
I’m a college student and I’ll graduating in half a year. I’m very worried about my future, because find a good job is so much difficult. At the moment, my parents want me to be a teacher, and I don’t like that idea. During my holiday break, I work part-time as a tour guide in my hometown. I liked job very much. But my parents didn’t agree with me. They thought the work was difficulty, even though one could make a lot of money. That is the most important to me is that being a tour guide won’t take me far from home. I always consider what my parents say, but it’s hard for me to take a decision. Could you give me some suggestion?
仔细阅读下列句子,每句中均有一个错误,请找出并在横线上改正,请按下列情况改正:
该句多一个词:把多余的词用斜线( / )划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。
该句缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该句错一个词:把错的词下划一横线,在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
A day, I came across an old friend in a museum.
My friend was in his sixties. Therefore, he looked so
young. I asked him how he stayed young.
He told me take exercise was a good way
to keep health, such as, having a walk.
His office was 2 miles far away from his home .Every day
he went to work on foot instead taking a bus. He
also gave me some other suggestion to be in good
health. He thought how fun it was to do sports.
Heard what he said, I decided to take action.
此题要求改正文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断: 如无错误, 在改行的后面划对号 (√); 如有错误 (每行只有一个错误), 则按下列情况改正:
此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线 (\ ) 划掉, 在该行的右边的横线上写出该词, 并也用斜线划掉。
此行少一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (∧), 在该行右边的横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词:在错的词下划一横线, 在该行的右边写出改正后的词。
注意:原行没有错的不要改。
Yesterday we went plant trees on the hill near _____
our school. The boys was made to dig pits(坑).The _____
girls were told to plant the young trees into the pits. _____
All of us worked very hardly. Soon we were all wet _____
with sweat. After the young trees planted, we _____
began to water it. The water was at the foot of ____
the hill. But we stood in line to pass pails(桶) _____
of water from one to other up to the hill. ____
We did not finish water the trees until it _____
was dark. We feel very happy. ____