下文中共有10处错误每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\)。并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不记分。
Dear Rom,
I’m very exciting to hear that you are coming to our school soon. Now let me to introduce our school to you. Our school is a very famously school with a long history. We have many experienced teacher and excellent equipment. There were two teaching buildings; one is for seniors and other is for juniors. There are two lab buildings or a library. Except Chinese, maths, English, physics and chemistry, we have some electives. The students can choose that they like to attend. We love our school. I am looking forward to meet you soon.
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一个横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从十一处起)不计分。
Li Hua and I were neighboures and we went to same school. We always went to school together. We were good friend and had a great deal to share with every day. However, one day, Li Hua copied my homework, which made me such angry that I did not want to be friends with him any long. Then on Monday morning I ran downstairs without realize it was raining, but there was no time to return home to fetch an umbrella. It happens that Li Hua was just around the corner and be offered to share her umbrella with me. He made apology to me in a gently voice. I forgave him but gave him a hug.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Sunday I saw a worst storm in years.It came sudden and went on for over three hours.After lunch, I went into my room to have a rest.The air was hot, but all was quiet.Then a strong wind started to blow into my room.Pieces of paper on my desk flew high into the air and some flew out the open window.As I ran out to catch it, big drop of rain began to fall.When I come back into the house, it was raining more harder and harder.Then I heard a loud crashing sound from the back of the house.When I ran out to find out that had happened, a big tree had fallen down and broke the top of the backroom.
假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌的以下作文,文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加,删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Grandpa,
How are you those days? I have been missing you very much after I went to college a year ago. Whenever I think of the old days, I feel very happily. I still remember when I was child, you always held me in your arms and told me stories till I fall asleep. We often went to the fields to enjoy the pleasant view there. You told me the name of different plants and their characteristics. Gradually, I became interesting in biology and chose to learn biology when I entered into the college. Now my friend Ann, together with me, are going to do field study and the findings will be use as materials for our research. Since we’ll do the study in our hometown, I hope to see you by then.
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。请按下列情况改正:
此句话多一个词:把多余的词用斜线()划掉, 在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。
此句话缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),在该句话右边写出该加的词。
此句话错一个词:在错的词下划一横线,在该词的下边写出改正后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
One afternoon on April, 1912, a new ship set off from England to America on it first trip. It was one of the largest and best ship at that time. It was cold, but the ship was pleasant and people are enjoying themselves. The next day was even cold. People could see icebergs here or there. It was night, suddenly, the man on watch shouting “look out! Iceberg!" It was too late, a ship hit the iceberg and came to a stop. There that was a very big hole in the ship and water began to come. Slowly the ship started to go down.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\ )划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I was born in a farmer’s family in Suizhong County, Liaoning Province in June, in 1965.When I was a child, I dreamed flying in the sky.I joined the army in June, 1983.In 1992, I was sent to the air force base.In August, 1996, I become one of the first 14 members from 1,500 pilot through the physical examination.I worked hardly, so I was among the first astronauts of our country in 1998.
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I was choosed as one of the first man space aircraft astronauts later.In Oct.15, 2003, I successful flew to space, circled around the earth about 14 circles and then returned.I was honored to have given the chance to be the first Chinese to travel in space.
下文中共有10处错误每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\)。并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不记分。
When tea and coffee was first introduced to Europe in 18th century, people thought they were harmful. So a king of Sweden decided to find out whether this was true and not. It happened that there were two brothers who were in the prison at the time. The king ordered one of them drink tea every day and the other coffee. Both of him lived many years without any problem. At last the one who had drink tea every day died at the age of 83 and the other one lived even long. Because of this today Sweden is one of the country where many tea and coffee are drunk.
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Yesterday, I went to have lunch in a restaurant. The restaurant was such crowded that the food arrived late and the fish was cold. I was on a hurry, so I started eating the food anyway. Several minute later, a server came to me and was asked how I liked the meal. In that situation, he may choose to say honestly that you are disappointing that the food came out cold. However, I choose not to tell the truth. With a smile on my face, I told the server nothing satisfied me. I told lie. But it made the server happily.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线/ 划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不记分。
Dear Aunt,
I am unhappy now, and I don’t know how I should do. Mary and I got to know each other through English chat-room. Since then, we have had chatted online almost every night. We have many in common as we are both girls at the same age. We would like to tell each other many things which are kept secretly to others. I will feel uncomfortable unless I can’t find her online. Besides, she told me two days ago that she would go abroad soon. She insisted that she would get good education abroad than at home. I know it is wrong for her to think so, but I don’t know how to change his mind. Would you help me?
Yours,
Li Lin
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在此处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出修改的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从十一处起)不计分。
Which is known to all,nowadays the Internet is playing more and more important part in our daily life.In it,we can not only read news at home and abroad but also get so much information as possible.We are often send e-mails to our classmates or our teachers or make telephone call to our families as well as our friends.However,we can go to school on the net,read different kinds of books and even teach myself English.We can also enjoy music,watching sports and play computer games on the net.We could do shopping even without leaving our homes.
文中有10处错误,每句最多两处;每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加(在缺词处加一个漏字符号 ^,在其下面写出加的词),删除(把多余的词用斜线\划掉)或修改(在错词下划—横线,在下面写出修改后的词)。
注意:1.每处错误及修改仅限一词;2. 只修改10处, 从第11处起, 不计分。
College students have a little ways to pay their college fees. Many students
have their parents to pay the fees. Some students may apply to a bank loan and
others will try to find part-time jobs in and out of the campus. Apart from this,
many good student can win a scholarship. By this way they can pay at least part
of the fees. As to me, I will let my parents pay half of their fees because they are
rich enough. Beside my study, I will take up a part-time job by teach some high
school students math, physics, chemistry and English, as I’m very good at these
important subjects. Of course I will also work very hard at my lessons in order to I can easily win a scholarship.
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在此处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出修改的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从十一处起)不计分。
Nowadays many graduate are looking forward to get employment in big cities, not willing to work in the countryside. Unfortunately, there are enough chances to satisfy most of the job hunter in big cities, while in the countryside talented people are bad needed but a lot of posts are waiting for you. You can put your abilities to good use and you will able to make greater contributions of building a modern countryside. Therefore, I believe in you can have as bright a future in the countryside as we will have in the cities.
假定英语课上老师要求同学之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(/\),并在该句下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Jim,
Thank you for your last letter telling me your recently news. I'd like to tell you something about our school sports meet. It was holding on Oct.20, which was a fine day. There were over 1,600 students and teachers attend it. Wang Lin, a student from my class won the 100-meter race. He finishes the race in 11.2 seconds and broke down the school record. They were all very excited. The sports meeting was great success. That was why we were all making every effort to our class honor. Although I was not one of the winner, I was proud of what we had done.
Looking forward to receiving your letter.
Yours,
Li Ping
假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下面划一横线,并在该词下面写出改正后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It has been years since the Chinese get plastic bags from supermarkets for free. China has banned free plastic bags at shops and supermarkets, but people have to pay for them. The Chinese once used about 300 million of plastic shopping bags a day, which has caused environmentally pollution because plastic bags are not easy to break down. So the Chinese is encouraged to take their own bags for shopping. Then what kind of shopping bag is the best to carry? Some student in Chongqing have a extraordinary idea. They use old clothes to make cloth bags, and then to ask their parents and friends to use these cloth bags instead of plastic ones. They do so because they think it is our duty to help protecting the environment.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My sister saw a lovely cup when we are shopping the other day.She liked it at once.
Then she bent down and picked up to look at a price on it.As she did this, lots of tea
splashed(溅)on his T-shirt! I had to try hardly not to laugh at her shocked face! My sister
wanted get out of the shop as fast as she could when a shop assistant came over to us.It
was turned out to be her own cup, that she’d left on the shelf by mistake.The assistant
was clearly as embarrassing as my sister, for I just thought it was funny.