假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last Sunday I saw a worst storm in years．It came sudden and went on for over three hours．After lunch, I went into my room to have a rest．The air was hot, but all was quiet．Then a strong wind started to blow into my room．Pieces of paper on my desk flew high into the air and some flew out the open window．As I ran out to catch it, big drop of rain began to fall．When I come back into the house, it was raining more harder and harder．Then I heard a loud crashing sound from the back of the house．When I ran out to find out that had happened, a big tree had fallen down and broke the top of the backroom．
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标题号的每一行作出判断；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
Dear Li Lei ,
I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble in dealing with the
new college life . Here I would like to give you some advices . . __________
First of all , you should spare effort to work hard at all .__________
your lessons and develop different abilities . Only on this . __________
way are you likely to get ideal job for a better future . . __________
Secondly , communication skills were also required if you .__________
wants to get along well with your friends on college campus . . __________
Last but not least , live independently is of great importance . __________
to you , what means you should learn to face all challenges by .__________
yourself , and this will surely benefit from you a lot when you .__________
step into soeicty . I’ll be glad if you find my advice practically . . __________
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在下面加上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
| 例如： It was very nice to get your invitation to spend ∧ weekend with you. Luckily the  I was completely free then, so I’ll to say “yes”. I’ll arrive in Bristol at around 8 p.m.am in Friday evening. On |
I saw an accident happening on my way to home this afternoon. A girl was crossing the street on a zebra crossing while a young man drove a motorbike towards her. The young man saw the girl and tried to stop, and he drove too fast to stop. He hit the girl and fell off her motorbike. The girl was badly hurt and couldn’t move. The young man didn’t know how to do. I ran to a phone box nearby and dialed 110. Soon the police reached. They sent her hospital at once. One of the policeman talked to the young man and wrote something down while he was talking. I thought it is very dangerous to drive very fast.
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标题号的每一行作出判断；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
Dear Li Lei ,
I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble in dealing with the
new college life . Here I would like to give you some advices . . __________
First of all , you should spare effort to work hard at all .__________
your lessons and develop different abilities . Only on this . __________
way are you likely to get ideal job for a better future . . __________
Secondly , communication skills were also required if you .__________
wants to get along well with your friends on college campus . . __________
Last but not least , live independently is of great importance . __________
to you , what means you should learn to face all challenges by .__________
yourself , and this will surely benefit from you a lot when you .__________
step into soeicty . I’ll be glad if you find my advice practically . . __________
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在下面加上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
| 例如： It was very nice to get your invitation to spend ∧ weekend with you. Luckily the  I was completely free then, so I’ll to say “yes”. I’ll arrive in Bristol at around 8 p.m. am in Friday evening. On |
I saw an accident happening on my way to home this afternoon. A girl was crossing the street on a zebra crossing while a young man drove a motorbike towards her. The young man saw the girl and tried to stop, and he drove too fast to stop. He hit the girl and fell off her motorbike. The girl was badly hurt and couldn’t move. The young man didn’t know how to do. I ran to a phone box nearby and dialed 110. Soon the police reached. They sent her hospital at once. One of the policeman talked to the young man and wrote something down while he was talking. I thought it is very dangerous to drive very fast.
I picked out a baby bird without any feathers on my __________
way home. It was too young to feed itself, so I took it __________
into my room and fed it careful. It grew up a month later. __________
It kept in a birdcage made by myself. One morning, I __________
happened to think that it should return to the nature and that __________
the forest should be it’s home indeed, so I set it free. To __________
my surprise and joy, it fly down and stood on my shoulder, __________
appeared to welcome me when I came back after school. __________
From then , I often saw it fly away as I left for school and __________
fly back when I came to home. We were good friends for years. __________
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