There are advantage for students to work while studying at school.One of them was that they can earn money.In the most part,students working to earn money for their own use.Earning their own money allow them to spend on anything as if they please.They would have to ask their parents for money or for permission to do things by the money.Some students may also to save up for our college or future use.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词;
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\ )划掉;
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Tim,
I’m so excited and happy to hear that you’re coming to China.Since your trip is schedule for the middle of July,time is no a problem for me because I would be having my summer holiday at that time.
I’ve been very busy recent,for I’ve been prepared for the coming entrance exam,that is vital for me and my future life.Last week,I attended an English speech intending for high school students all over the province and I won first prize.Therefore,I’ve always dreamt of having the opportunity to travel in English-speaking countries like yours to practice and improve my English,as well make friends with people from other countries.
I am looking forward to seeing you.
Yours,
Li Hua
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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
This is the first time that I had been away from home, so I find it hard to live here. How I wish I can turn to Lucy, who once gave me much help! I had trouble with my study in Grade 9. So frustrating was I that I began to play computer games after school, when I should have paid more attention to catching up with others. Beside, I was even caught cheating in the exam, it worried my parents a lot. When asking about the reason why I fell far behind, I was too guilty to say a word. It was then Lucy came to my help, telling me not to give up. To my amazement, I made a great progress. Finally, I even became one of the top student in my class. I must say thanks to Lucy, without whose help I could never have had so good grades.
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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之问交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I really spent a color and happy holiday. As senior student,I am not total free in the summerholiday. That is because study is still an important part in your life. In the first month of theholiday, I stayed at home to finishing my homework. There was many tasks I have to finish.
Besides, I attended English or math training classes because of my weakness in the two subjects.
After that, I, together with my mother, went to another province to see my father, and we have notseen him for a long time. My mother and l missed him so very much that we spent a month forhim. We were happy together.
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A young man called Low-Carbon Brother become a hit on the Internet in 2011. He suggests living a low carbon life, which means using less energy in our daily life so that we can help reducing carbon dioxide in the air. For example, she always picks up some waste paper on the street or uses the blank side to write something. While he is watching TV, he always turns up the screen brightness to the minimum and turns off the light. Therefore, he goes to work by bike instead of driving. Some people think what he is doing is just a show. No one can live such a simply life with so many modern invention around us. As far as I am concerned, I am strongly in favor his idea and his behavior. Although what he is doing has no huge effect on global warming, but he at least can enjoy a healthy life.
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文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Mr. Brown,
I'm very thankful to you for invite me to stay with you in Beijing in the coming summer vacation. I have been dreamed of seeing you again so that I can get more help from you in my English learning. And I'm afraid I can't go to your place in this summer. I have promised my grandmother, she lives in the country, to spend the summer with her. She misses too much that I find difficult to refuse her invitation. I'm busy now prepare for my examination. I plan to visit you in winter if it convenient to you.
Best wishes,
Li Ming
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Mary,
I receive your E-mail just now.Don’t worry about me.I’m getting on well my research work in the laB. But to my greatly surprise you say you will give up learn English.The reason is because you have not done well in it recently and you have lost interest.I’m afraid I can’t agree on you.I know it is difficult to learn English, and English is wide used in the world today.It will be important tool in our future work.Beside, it is becoming more and more important in your daily life.If you study hard, you will be succeeD. Do remember where is a will there is a way.I’m looking forward to hear good news from you.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。作文中共有十处语言错误。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其该词下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下面画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
A boy who was cleaning the shoes in the street said to a young men passing by, “Let me clean your boots.It’ll cost you only a penny.” But the young man refuseD. Then the boy told him that he will clean her boots for nothing .The young man agreed, and soon a boot shining brightly .Then he put the other boot on the box, and the boy refused clean it unless he was paid two pence for his work .The young man refused to pay anything and went away.But the well-cleaned boot made the dirty one such bad that he could walk on.Final, he turned back and gave the boy two pence.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文, 文中共有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处, 错误涉及一个单词的增加、删减或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The teacher I loved most was my English teacher at senior high.She was one of those strict teacher but she was very patiently with us and cared about each one of us.Thus we guys all respected for her.She told us many stories about English history and spent a lot of time teach us literature and how to write.She always writes helpful suggestions for writing, organizing and presented better work.She encouraged us to read and write for pleasure, that gave us confidence.She always made us to feel happy in his class.She made big difference to our lives.That’s why I teach now.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线(____),并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Jin Jing,
Your problem is common one among middle school students.Maybe the following advices can help you.First in all, believe in yourself.Your greatest problem is that you don’t have selfconfidence.The first thing you must do is to smile at your classmates.One smile speaks loud about your wish to make the friends than any word.Your smile will show that you are friendly to him.Next, trying talking with a student who is as shy as you or who share the same interest with you.You can discuss your studies with a classmate, and you can also talk about your hobbies as well.Unless someone is in trouble, you should be ready to help him or her.Once you have confidence, you can make as many friends as possibly.
Yours,
Lily
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下便条。便条中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加,删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号( ^ ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除;把多余的词 用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
A discussion about hiking had been held in our class.Some students think that hiking during vacations can make people feel healthier, fresher or more harmonious with the nature.They find themselves deep attracted by the beauty of nature.They can also be relaxing by walking in deep mountains.But nowadays some hikers even begin to explore the places people have ever been to, and accidents have happened now and then because poor knowledge of hiking.Some hikers even lost their life.The other students in our class think not safe to organize such dangerous activities.They make suggestions which laws should be passed and hikers should be trained before they attend the activities.
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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改所写故事,请你修改你同桌写的以下故事。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉。
修改:在错的词后划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Time fly like an arrow. I'm already in the first half of Senior Grade 3 before I realized it. It is only a little more than six months before I graduate middle school. At the present, I'm busy review my lessons in order to take the College Entrance Examination.
I hope to go to Beijing University, that is one of the best universities not only in China but also in the world. I'll try my best turn my dream into reality. Most of my classmates are also studying very hardly to realize our dreams. I do believe everyone will be able to enter a very good university and college.
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请修改下面的短文。短文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It is well-known that good habits do us good all our life. Entered high school, I took delight in having fast food and often eat too much. In the end, I was so serious overweight that I suffered a lot from my awkward appearance. It made matters worse was the fact that my classmates made a fun of me at times. From now on, I made up my mind to avoiding snacks. In the meanwhile, I took off jogging to lose weight. To my surprise, it was not long until I did succeed in creating my new appearance. Only then I start to appreciate the importance of developing a good habit.
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My mom and I am fighting. We used to get on so well, and these days, she has been arguing with me about my not coming to home. She thinks I should spend more time help her with the housework instead going out a lot. In her eyes,I’m just a lazy boy whom only loves playing. The fact is that some of my friends and I are going to different school soon,so I want to spend as many time as I can with them. I knew I should try to understand the situation from her point of view.But I hope she can understand what important these friends are to me.
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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
To show our love for poor kids lived in mountainous areas, our school hold a special activity last week in our school square. Its purpose was to making sure those poor kids have a warm winter. All the teachers and students in our school took an actively part in this activity. We gave away 478 pieces of clothes and 256 pairs of shoe altogether. After be sorted, they will be sent to those in the need. I believe what they did will make a great difference to those poor kids. Although we all learn to care for others, the world will be more comfortable to live.