假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Ms. Helen,
I am pleasing to offer you the position of after-sales manager in our company starting on 16 June, 2016. You were given the right to discuss this offer and to seek advices on the attached proposed agreement with your family, a lawyer, or someone else you trust. Unless you want some information on your employment rights, you can also contact the Employment Service Office or visiting our website.
Also, if you disagree this offer or wish to clarify something in it, please ring myself to discuss any issue you wish to raise.
If you are happy with the proposed terms and wish to accept an offer of employment, please sign this letter and return it to me by 1 June, 2016. In case of I have not heard from you by that date, this offer will be automatical withdrawn.
Li Hua
VI. 短文改错
找出下面一段文章中的错处并改正。如该行缺一词，在文中缺词处标上“ ” ，并在相应的横线上写上正确的词语；如该行多一词，在文中用斜线划掉多余的词，并在相应的横线上写上该词，用斜线划去；如该行错一词，在文中用横线标出，再在相应的横线上写上正确的词语。如该行无错，在相应的横线上打上“ ” 。
示例：
Betty wants to be nurse and works with sick people a
who need her helps. help 
Last summer Betty had broke her leg. had 
The pain was very great and she couldn’t walk.
The telephone rang and I picked out the receiver(话筒). “Hello,” 69.____________
I said. “Hello,” said the voice. “Bill here, is Betty there?” 70.____________
“I’m sorry,” I said, “You have got the wrong number.” 71.____________
A few seconds late, the telephone rang again. Just 72.____________
as I expected he was Bill, “You have made a mistake again.” 73.____________
I explained. The telephone rang a third time. This made I 74.____________
angry. I speak in a big voice, “Hello, Bill, Betty here.” 75._____________
For a moment there was a dead silent. Then someone said, 76._____________
“What’s the wrong with you, Tom?” It was my mother. 77._____________
I could do anything but say sorry to my mother. 78_____________
| I had a interesting dream last night.I dreamed |
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| of I took part in a race.At first,I could not run very |
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| fast and fell behind.So I didn’t lose heart and kept |
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| running.All the students on the playground cheer me on, |
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| “Come on!”I was too encouraged that I ran faster and faster |
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| till I caught up with all the other runners.I felt as if to flying like |
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| a superman.By the end,I got to the finishing line first. |
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| I won the race.I felt very proud myself.Many of my |
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| classmate threw me up into the air.Just at that time |
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| I woke up and found me still in bed! |
短文改错（每小题1分，满分10分）
Last night, I have a strange but interesting dream. On the way back home. I came across child from another planet. His clothes seemed to be shining and looked beautifully. As I got close to him, he looked frightening and turned his back to me. Though I couldn’t speak his language, I used hand gestures to talk about him. A while later, he told me lots of amazing thing on his planet, which made me laughing, but suddenly, he began to cry, and then he explained he had lost his way but couldn’t find his home. Seeing that, I was offered to help him. His home had a telephone number like ours, so I asked him to call his parents using my phone. Soon before making the call he disappeared.
短文改错(共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分)
注意：没处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
As we all known, the disabled are also important members of our society. Unfortunate, they can not do everything like another healthy people because of their disabilities. We need help from others. As a healthy people, we should show them our sympathy (同情)and help them. We should not make funny of them or ignore them. Just accept them for who they were, and help them adjust to the surrounding. When they fail, we can help them in many way, like saying “never mind” to them, giving them encouragement, or help them face the next challenge. In my view, helping the disabled is the duty of everyone rather than only the government.
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的
词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分
Great changes have been taken place in the w
ay people communicate with each other. In the
past people write letters to share informations and later they talked with each other in the telephone
Now more and more people use our own mobile phones to communicating. And instead writing on
the paper, they e-mail to each other on the computer. As a result, people find that quicker and easier
to communicate, and at the same time some people feel that they become poorer in writing. They
worry about whether people can be as closely as before.
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