假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I was really pleased to my purchase of a new pair of shoes from major retailer (零售商). About a week late, on a rainy day, I was in a rush and quick grabbed my shoes from the rack (架子) and made my way into town. To my horrible, I felt a wet sensation inside my right shoe – it is leaking.
I returned to the shop to complaining about the leaking right shoe. At customer service, the assistants looked at both shoes and said, “Yes, sir, you’re correct – the right shoe leaks, and unfortunately only the left shoe was bought from this store.” My apology was as more swift as my departure.
短文改错（每小题1分，共10分）
| It was fine in April 8, 1994. That day all the students in our class went to suburb of our city to plant trees. On arrive at the planting place at 8 o'clock the teacher asked every of us to plant 5 trees at least. Then we set out digging, planting and watering. All of us were going all out to finish our task, afraid of being fallen behind. Between us, our monitor set a good example for us. In spite of his illness, he accepted his task and finished it ahead of the time. Then he went on to help others without a few rest. After work, we were wet all over, but looked at the lines of the young trees, we smiled pleasantly. |
短文改错 （共10小题，满分16分）
此题要求改正所有短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（P）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（
）,在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下面划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Last summer I go to America and studied at a language 1___
school. I had many wonderful experience, but I also 2_
had a sad one. One day, the school held the party, where 3______
I invited to talk about Inner Mongolia. After that they asked me lots of 4___
things about China. And I couldn’t explain them in English 5____
clearly. I felt sadly. I learnt a lesson from this experience. I 6___
have already studied English for eight years, but I can’t use it 7_____
very good. I must work hard to improve my spoken English 8______
so that I will not be able to communicate freely with foreigners. 9____
I hope I can be a bridge between China and others countries 10___
in the future.
短文改错（共15小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，并在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
| On the first day when I went to work in a very famous |
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| restaurant, my boss complained that there were very a few |
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| people come for dinner. So I was “invited” to have a meal in |
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| the restaurant. Before ordering two French dishes and some |
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| food, I began to look frequently my watch timing the serving |
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| of the meal. Meanwhile, I looked around to see that there was |
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| anything wrong there. I wrote down the problems secret. My meal |
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| was not served yet. I looked at my watch: 32 minute had |
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| passed! I realized that wait too long for service was the main |
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| reason why the business was poor. Then I write a report about my findings and presented it to the boss. |
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
以下标有题号的每一行均有一个错误，请找出，并按下列情况改正： 
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉； 此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词；此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：请在答题卡上作答。
Dear Mr. 
Manager,
I’m writing to express my thank to you and your employee ________
Miss Li Hong who helped me found my handbag while I ________
was shopping in your shop in March 24． 
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That day I was greatly interesting and lost myself in enjoying ________
a beautiful product. After I paid a pair of silk socks, I ________
left my handbag on the counter. I have already walked out of ________
the shop then Miss Li came up with my handbag. I thanked ________
her and offered her a reward of 20 dollars and she refused to ________
take even a cent. I deeply moved by her spirit. Miss Li’s ________
good qualities are something I’ll always keep on in mind. ________
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，共10分）
以下标有题号的每一行均有一个错误，请找出，并按下列情况改正：
此行多一词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉, 在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一词：在错词的下面划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：请在答题卡上作答。
Recently I've conducted a survey on if girls should 1.
lose weight among my classmate. Most of the students hold the 2.
view that girls should lose weight. In their opinion, girls are slim 3.
are more beautiful and attractively, and they are more confident in 4.
their study and work than those who are fat. Therefore, a few of the 5.
students have a different opinion. We think it’s a waste of time 6.
and money. In addition, lose weight may be harmful to their 7.
body and mind. After all, anything is more important than 8.
the health. If girls take weight-loss pills and then stop doing that 9.
some day, they will become fatter. So it is no need for young girls 10.
to lose weight as long as they are healthy.
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