假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共
有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Kate,
How are you? Today I’ve got a wonderful news to tell you. I have offered a scholarship at a university in Australia for my further educations. One hundred and twenty students took exams for it, but only a few was chosen and I was one of them. However, my parents are not happy about it. They are strong against me going there. They say it is too far away that they will not see me for a whole year and they are afraid of I will feel lonely. They can’t imagine a girl so young live alone. They advise me study in the capital instead. Then I’ll be able to continue living with them. How can I persuade them to accept the fact I have grown up?
Yours,
Jane
With the popularity of the Internet, more and more people prefer to going shopping online because its advantages. Online shopping can cost us a lot of valuable time. What’s more , there are a wide variety of goods for us to choose from , which may be cheaper than that in shops. Though it is convenience to go shopping online, the problems it caused can’t be ignored. Since we can’t see the actual goods on the Internet, the quality cannot be ensured. Beside, lots of advertisement on the Internet are untrustworthy, so sometimes the customers are easily cheated.
In my opinion, we should be carefully while we are enjoyed the convenience of online shopping.
Jim is one of my closely friends. Two months ago, his mother bought a computer to him as a birthday present. She hoped Jim will study hard with the help of the computer. To his surprise, Jim just wasted plenty of time play computer games every day. Now she regrets buying the computer. As matter of fact, a computer can do a lot of everyday jobs for us. It is wide used in factories, hospitals, banks and so on. Many computers scientists are now trying to make the computer to “think” like a man. In my opinion, the key is what we should use it wisely.
英语课上,老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下小作文为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
3．必须按答题要求做题，否则不给分。
My grandmother is a village woman. She is already in her seventy. Although she received little school education, but she is aware that knowledge is of great important to young people. When my father was young, my grandmother took good care him so that my father could cost more time on his studies. Now, she often encouraged me to study hard. This summer she was bad ill in bed. When I visited her during the summer holiday, I found her sitting in bed, made new shoes for me! I was so deeply moving that tears came to my eyes. So is my grandmother, a kind and hardworking woman. I’ll respect and love her forever.
改错（共5小题；每小题1分，满分5分）
每句中仅有一处错误，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。 增加： 在缺词出加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在该行右面横线上写出该加的词。删除： 把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，并在该行右面横线上写出该词，并用斜线（＼）划掉。修改： 在错的词下划一横线，并在该行右面横线上写出修改后的词。 Sports in America take variety of forms. _________
Respect is the key of keeping friendships. _________
We should make a better use of our resources. _________
Those who have trouble bend can grow crops vertically on trellises. _________
Not surprising, this type of exercise can also help you control your weight. _________
请修改下面的短文。短文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出修改后的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1，每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2，只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
Many times when I was at a bad mood I shouted at the people around me. I scream, shouted and ran as fast as I could relieve my pressure. So it was useless,since I still had to return to the problem. This term I begin to change. I have realized however greater the difficulty is, I have to face with it. It’s no use screaming andshouting at others. Beside, there are teachers and friends around me who are ready tohelping me. As long as I try my best, I can make a progress in any aspect. Now I feel every day is a pleasant day and the sun is always shining bright on my face.
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