假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两赴,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(八),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I'm very grateful to my English teacher. In the past, my biggest shortcoming used to being carelessness, that worried me a lot. To make matters worse, I was so anxious to seek the fundamental reason in my failure. I just devoted me to huge amounts of practice, not paying attention to repeated mistakes. Fortunately, my teacher noticed it and offers to have a long talk with me. She gave me lots of advices on how to get rid of it. After I was persuading to change my attitude, I finally got the right way to rid myself of carelessness and gained confidence as well as. It was the support she had given me made me what I’m today.