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Dear Abby,
How are you? Today I've got a wonderful news to tell you. 76._______
I have offered a scholarship at a university in Australia for my 77._______
further education. One hundred and twenty students took exam 78._______
for it, but only a few was chosen and I was one of them. However, 79._______
my parents are not happy about it. They are strong against me 80._______
going there. They say it is too far away that they will not see me 81._______
for a whole year and they are afraid of I will feel lonely. They 82._______
can't imagine a girl so young live alone. They advise me to study 83._______
in the capital instead. Then I'll be able to continue living with 84._______
them. How can I persuade them to accept the fact I have grown up? 85._______
Best wishes,
Jane
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
1.该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并用斜线划掉。
2.该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，在该行右边的横线上写出该加的词。
3.该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出
Dear Mr. and Mrs. Brown,
I’m writing to you from my home in China. I returned
home safe and sound. When thinking of the wonderful day ______________
I spent in New Orleans, I just can’t help think of both of______________
you. It was very kind for you to have provided everything______________
to make my stay there such happy experience. I’ve______________
learned so many, not only English but also culture. And I______________
really enjoy a great deal, the fun and laughter that we shared______________
them with each other. Thank you very much. I’ll always______________
remember this trip as well as your kind.______________
Welcome to China when it’s convenient for you. I’ll be very ______________
glad to show you around. And you’ll surely have a pleased______________
visit here.
I’ll keep in touch and write you later. Please take care!
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线(___)，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Yesterday morning, I was surprising to hear that my best friend Allee has been hit by a car and was in hospital. The other day when he was going to cross a street, he was such careful that he didn’t go until he saw the traffic light to turn green. But hardly had he got to the middle of the street while he saw a car suddenly appear on his right-hand side and come directly towards them. It was too late for Allee to escape. He was hit by the car or was thrown a few meters away. He was sent to the nearest hospital immediately and had operation. When I went to see him, he was out of dangers but still looked pale. I sincere hope he will recover and return to normal as soon as possible
文中共有10处错误，涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在此处加一个漏字符号 ( ∧ )，并在其下面写出修改的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线 ( ＼ ) 划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从十一处起）不计分。
My parents have decided to taking me to Britain for a visit．I am excited, hoping to make good use this opportunity．Firstly, I will talk to native speaker as much as I can to improve my English．Secondly, there were many attractions that interests me a lot, among which is Big Ben. Besides, football, which it is popular in England, is my favorite sport．I have been dreaming of watching a living football match there but now the dream will come true. My friend Alice lives in London．I will probable meet her. However I do, I am sure I will have a good time．
假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线＼划掉。
修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m very much glad to hear that your shopping centre will build non-smoking supermarket. In my opinion, it’s a good idea to do so, for it can not only help the smokers to smoke less, and it can also do good to other customers’ health. Since you had given up selling cigarettes, the customers don’t like smoking are sure to support you. In addition, smoke in the shopping centre may cause fire, which is dangerous to both your possessions and the safe of the customers. In a word, the non-smoking supermarket will not effect your business. To the contrary, it will help you attract more customers who want to keep health.
Best wishes!
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在下面加上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Today my family went on an outing to Tai Po . I rode bike with my sister .We felt excitedly . Mum and Dad had a picnic . Mum makes some sandwiches.They were delicious ! We ate a lot and were full . Since that we flew a kite . My sister ran and fell down .She cried loudly and noisily .Mum and Dad was upset . So I told my sister , “ I fell down when I was four but I didn’t cry . Now you are six year old . Why are you crying ? ” My sister was angry to hear for that . She cried louder and louder .So Dad told to her a joke . Then he laughed . Mum and I were happy , too. How a wonderful day !
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