第二卷
第四部分写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节 短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满份10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10初语言错误，每句中最多有两处。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符合(^)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
修改：在错的词下划—横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.至允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Christine was just a girl in one of my class. I never knew much about her except for that she was strang . she didn’t talk many .her hair was black and purple, and she worn black sports shoes and a black sweater ,although in the summer .she was ,infact, rather attractively, and she never seemed care what the rest if us thought about her .like the rest of my classmate ,I didn’t really want to get closest to her . it was only when we did their chemistry projiect together that I begin to uanderstand why christine dressed the way she did .
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文，文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线划掉；
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
In the summer holiday, we travelled to Qingdao and paid visit to my uncle there. It’s a long and bored journey. But the moment I arrived, I fall in love with the city. It’s such beautiful a city that I can hardly find any word to describe it. The streets are cleaning and the sky is blue. If you walk along the coast, you can feel the wind to blowing on your face. The sea is vast and sometimes you can find a boat or a ship. You may also do some fishing as far as it is permitted. Moreover, I think the driver there drive too fast in the street. You can never be too careless when crossing the street.
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处一个漏字符号（
），并在下面加上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Knowing that our library is going to buy books, I’d like to give some suggestion.
That we need most are popular science books. Usually popular science books explain basic principles of nature in simple and interesting way. They helped us understand science subjects better and arouse our curious about scientific discoveries.
In addition to read for knowledge, we read for fun and inspiration. That is because I recommend other category of books: literary books. Classic works, written by famous writers are present great thoughts through fascinating stories and language. They not only offer us joy and excitement, but also encourage us to think critical.
I’ll be glad if you can consider my recommendation.
Yours sincerely
Li Yue
短文改错 （共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分）
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Mary,
I’ve received your E-mail．Don’t worried about me．I’m getting on well with my research work in the lab．But in my surprise, you say you will give up learn English．The reason is because you have not done well in it recently and you have lose interest．I’m afraid that I can’t agree with you．I know it is not easy to learn English, and English is widely used in the world today and it will be important tool in our future work．Beside, it is becoming more and more important in our daily life．If you study hardly, you will succeed．Do remember that where there is a will there is a way．I’m looking forward to hearing a good news from you!
Yours,Li Hua
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下便条。便条中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（ ^ ），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除；把多余的词 用斜线（ \ ）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1；每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
The other day after work, I was walking down the street while I saw a boy riding a nice unicycle, one of those bicycle with only one wheel. Dressing in all pink from head to toe, he was singing a song which was sounded like a kid’s song. I thought he must be total crazy. Just then, a lady dropped 20-dollar bill on the ground, but he didn’t realize it and started to walk away. The guy in pink picked out the money and gave it back to her. After that, he rode on but soon disappeared before the lady could thank him. How a strange and good guy!
假段定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处
加一个漏字符号(
)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Today, many people think competition is the key for success. They struggle for our own personal goals with no regard for the people around them. I believe such thinking is out of date and contemporary society, including society as a whole as well as individuals, demands that we cooperated with others. The world economy is expected to remain favor. However, the negative effects of high oil prices, competition for resources and global population is on the rise. To overcome these problem, countries must pay attention to their relationships and act it together. The fight against problems so as AIDS and terrorism requires cooperated. Our own personal success is not different. In order to succeed, we must cooperate to solve problems.
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