假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下便条。便条中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（ ^ ），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除；把多余的词 用斜线（ \ ）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
A discussion about hiking had been held in our class．Some students think that hiking during vacations can make people feel healthier, fresher or more harmonious with the nature．They find themselves deep attracted by the beauty of nature．They can also be relaxing by walking in deep mountains．But nowadays some hikers even begin to explore the places people have ever been to, and accidents have happened now and then because poor knowledge of hiking．Some hikers even lost their life．The other students in our class think not safe to organize such dangerous activities．They make suggestions which laws should be passed and hikers should be trained before they attend the activities.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其正下方写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（ ）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I used to be a shy girl in my primary school. I was too weak in English at that time, especially in speaking English that I was afraid to answer the teacher’s questions during English classes. Before I entered into middle school, something changed. I started to read many interesting story and my English teacher was patiently with me and helped me a lot. I studied hard in class and practiced by watching English films and listen to English songs in my free time. Little by little, I found that more and more interesting to learn English. I can even talk with my classmates fluently in English and I was shy any more. At last, I got high grades in English and had confidence to do it better in the future.
短文改错
共有十处错误，增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符∧，并在其下写上该词
删除：把多余的词用\划掉
修改：在错词下画一横线，在其下写上修改后的词
My grandfather and I enjoy fishing.
One Sunday morning we go fishing at a lake. We took ours fishing poles and headed for the lake.As soon as we arrived, so we dropped the lines into the water.Before waiting for about half an hour, I was beginning to get impatiently, I wanted to give up, and my grandfather told me to wait a little longer. Finally, there were a sudden pull at the pole and fish was caught. Within the next few minute, my grandfather also caught a fish.
Felt hungry, we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish. It was delicious.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。作文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（＾），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I have a good friend who name is Liu Mei．She is our monitor and one of the excellent student in our class．Clever as she is，but she works very hard．We have a lot on common and have a lot to talk about．One evening，she told me that something happened when her parents was out．She was doing her homework one Sunday morning while she smelt something burning．She stopped look out of the window and found a cloud of smoke come out of her neighbor’s house．She called 119 immediate．Ten minutes later, the firemen came and put out fire．Her neighbor was very thankful for her help．
：短文改错 （共10分;每小题1分,满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改： 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起） 不计分。
Nowadays, there is a increasing number of people joining in the activities of volunteering．It’s well-known that volunteering jobs are making contributions to society with something in return．It’s as the Spirit of Lei Feng．However, knowing this, there are still many people would like to devote themselves to this trend．For instance, the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games had such many volunteers．They make lots of contributions to the success of the Olympics．Moreover, we can often see many students go to visit the old to take warm to them．Even though some people’s career is a volunteer．They are ready to helping others．Although the volunteers are much more common, we still need to thank they for devoting themselves to society．
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有l0处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(＾)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear schoolmates，
In order to get high school students to attaching importance to the environment and raise our awareness to protect the environment，and China Daily is planning to hold an interest knowledge contest．A contest starts on October 14th and end on 31 st．Remember, you can take the contest in China Daily newspaper, that is very popular among high school student．The answer sheet must cut from the newspaper and sent to China Daily after the deadline．
Please pay more attention to the related information of the contest and take an active part in them on time．
Students’ Union
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