假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Young people have different attitude towards music．As we all known，most people throughout the world love music．Anyway，nowadays young people have begun to show enthusiasm for pop stars．
Many young people have a greatly passion for different kinds of pop music．They buy CDs and to download songs from the Internet．They enjoy the excitement pop music bring，and try to convey their own ideas in pop music．
As far as I concerned，we cannot deny that pop music is an essential part of our life．However，follow pop music blind should be discouraged．That we should do is to take a more critical attitude towards the pursuit of pop music．
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（ √ ）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（ ），在该行右边的横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原文没有错的不要改。
I like riding my bike. Though it is not very new, but it is ___________
my best friend. I find very convenient to go anywhere with a __________
bike. Riding gives me not only exercises but also pleasure. I __________
use my bike almost in summer when the weather is warm ________
and dry. It can be very pleasant in winter when it is cold and __________
rain is pour down. It can also be very dangerous. Of course __________
I will be very careful in my bike. In fact, accidents are not __________
the only problem. One day I went to school and come back ___________
to find front wheel was missing. It was a long walk to ___________
the repairer’s shop. Now I have two strong locks. ________
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你的同桌写的以下作文。文中有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下写出应该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Jennifer considers me like a friend to talk, laugh, and do things with her. She believes that I am a friend she can depend in time of need. I was watering the flowers in the garden this morning when she drops in, telling me that she needed my help because I was in low spirits. When asking what made her so unhappy, Jennifer told me her friend Tina was reading her diary the other days when she entered the classroom. She was too angry at the time that she shouted at her, which, of course, ended their friend. Having heard what she said, I said, "We shall never have friends unless we expect to find them without faults."
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
As we all know, traveling can be an excited experience．Let me give you some
advices about the things that you have to pay attention．You can find out more
about your destination by surf the Internet before you set out．You needn’t take too
many money．Though it can be very convenient to pay in cash, using bank cards is
much more reliable．In additional, it will be necessary for you to take an umbrella in
case of it should rain．And if you are to travel abroad, you’d better understand the
cultural differences．Keep this in mind that being politely in foreign countries can
help you had a wonderful trip．
英语课上,老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下小作文为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
3．必须按答题要求做题，否则不给分。
Dear Mr. Johnson,
I’ve learned from a newspaper that some clerks are wanting in your company. I am
eager to being one of them. So I am writing the letter. My name is zhang Hua. I was
born in the Hebei Province and I am in good health. I’ve just graduated in the Computer
Department of Wuhan University. I did very good in all subjects and I am especial good
at computer studies and English. I can read science books in English and doing some
writing in English as well. Beside, I know a little French. And in my spare time, I enjoy
playing basketball. As is said that your company is very famous and I’ll very glad if you
let me work for it. My telephone number is 027-89276628．I am looking forward to
hearing from you soon.
此题要求改正所给短文中
的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断:如无错误,在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√);如有错误（每行只有一个错误）,则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词:在错的词下划一横线,在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意:原行没有错的不要改。
On May Day, Li Yue and Zhang Hua, student from Class Three, ____
Grade Two, went to Sunshine Nursing Home and do some voluntary ___
work. On their arrival, Li Yue and Zhang Hua were warm welcomed, _____
and respectfully, they presented the elderly with flowers and fruits. ________
Then, they started working once, cleaning the windows and the floor. ________
Everything done, they sat in the yard chatted with the elderly people. ________
When there was time for them to leave, the elderly people thanked ______
them their kindness. They said it was so beautiful a day that they _____
would remember forever. Li Yue and Zhang Hua were very happy. ____
How they did has brought joy to others and enriched their own lives. _____
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