假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Nowadays, as the development of the Internet, there comes a kind of language calling Web Language. Some people even speak Chinese mixed with English words. This is a phenomenon which is very worth think about, Some people think it is a kind of ridiculous. In their opinion, it make no sense in helping people learn English. Besides, it will ruin the Chinese language. However, others, specially the youngsters, are fond this new language. They think it of special help in expressing them. In my opinion, it’s not good to use this kind of language. It may be fashionable as some think, but you may also get your ideas confused, leaving the other people at a loss to your meaning.
五、改错
The alarm was first gone off on the third floor． 76 _________
People left building hurriedly but in an orderly manner． 77 _________
They came out carry their shopping bags and their parcels, 78 _________
some not properly wrapped and some not even paid． 79 _________
Most passer-by waited in the street to watch．Many of the 80 _________
shops and offices in the street had just closed．Mr．Clement． 81 _________
The officer in charge of, ordered all hoses（软管） 82 _________
to turned to the roof of the main building．People were pushed 83 ________
back from the area of their own safety．Seven officers 84 ________
entered the basement or were driven back within minutes． 85 _________
Hurriedly they put on their masks , ready to try again
第Ⅱ卷（满分 35分）
第四部分：写作（共二节，满分35分）
第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上划一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Mr．Moore is the teacher whom I respect mostly． 76．
Though he's 34，but he looks very young．He's the 77．
most popular teacher in our school．Comparing with 78．
others he pays much attention to his way of teaching． 79．
He tries various way to make his classes interesting．He 80．
thinks we should know“what” and understand“why”． 81．
So，he always encourages me to think by ourselves． 82．
Therefore，with his help，we all learned how to 83．
settle problems．How a wonderful world of“why” 84．
he lead us to! We all admire Mr．Moore． 85．
短文改错(共10小题，每小题1.5分，满分15分)
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Dear Miss Brown,
We have received your application last week. We regret 76. ______
to inform you that our company has hired other girl for 77. ______
the job of secretary. Having careful studied your certificate, 78. ______
we have decided that we need someone with more office’s 79. ______
experience for this particular position. You have impressed 80. ______
us, but, with your desire to learn and your ability to work 81. ______
hard. We hope that you will apply for position with our 82. ______
company some times in the future. We would like to 83. ______
thank you for your interesting in our company. Please 84. ______
contact to us if there are further questions. 85. ______
Yours sincerely,
John smith
第Ⅱ卷（非选择题，共35分）
第四部分写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，共10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误，对标有题号的每一题做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上划对号：如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下面情况改正：
此行多一词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一词：在错词的下面划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
I will share with you a true story happened a couple 76._________
of days ago. One of my classmates bought a bag of snacks 77.__________
from a food store. A few roommates were then invited to 78__________
enjoy snacks. Unluckily, all of then got poisoned and 79__________
had stomachaches with our faces pale. They were quickly 80.__________
sent to a nearby hospital. Doctors examine them and 81.__________
gave them some medicine. They out of dangerous 82__________
soon before taking the medicine. This accident should 83._________
make us to realize the seriousness of the food safety problem. 84.__________
I strongly suggest that the whole society pays more. 85.__________
VII短文改错(共10小题;每小题1.5分,满分15分)
One day, I went to the market and find many 76.
beautiful birds in few cages for sale. I heard 77.
two young men talked.One said,“I caught eight 78.
birds like these on last Sunday, but not a single one 79.
was lively the next morning.” Oh, God! The birds 80.
are being killed. The number is reducing year after year. 81.
Birds, like another animals, are our friends. They eat a 82.
lot of pests and make our nature beautifully. 83.
So we must do something to prevent them killed. 84.
We wish that everyone will care for them. 85.
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