假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Three years ago, I became a student in a ordinary school. Disappointing as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorly-equipped classroom, I found the teachers patient but considerate．Besides, I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere in class．I decide to make the best use for it. I worked hardly and got along well my teachers and classmates．Whenever I had difficulties, they were always helpful. Soon, I became one of the top student in my class, what greatly increased my confidence and I got more motivated．My experience tells me that it is not what you are given but that how you use it that determines who you are．
文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
As is known to all that our students of today have to fix our attention on our lessons, so we know few
of society. A holiday is the best time and the best chance to make up for that. Take a part-time job is a
good form of social practice. That we have learned in books and in class can’t have same important
effect on us as what we have learned through personal practice. In social practice, we can surely make
a progress in both knowledge or practical ability. Beside, when we take a part-time job, we may got
paid more or less to help our family. Thus, I will say a senior school student should take a part-time
job in his/her holiday, if possible.
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误，对标有题号的每一行作出判断；如无错误，在该行右边横线上画上一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正；
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行少一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线写出该加的词。
此行错一个词: 在错的词下面画一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Before lunch Allen happened to see a man fished in ___________
a ditch about five metre outside a bar. Allen stopped ___________
curiously. All people passing over the man who was fishing ___________
regarded him like a foolish man. Allen’s heart went out ___________
of him. He said kindly to fish-catcher, “Hello, will ___________
you please do me a favor and have a drink with me ___________
in the bar?” The man gladly received his invitation. ___________
After buying the man several cups soft-drinks, ___________
Allen asked, “You are fishing there, right? May I ___________
know how much fish you have caught this morning?” ___________
“You are the number 8,” said the man humorously.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（／）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Mum,
I’m considering work in Africa next year when I graduate. I will teach the English
in a village school in Zimbabwe, which is the southern part of Africa. There many adults
received few education when they were young but they want our kids to be well-educated.
There I won’t get paid very much and I don’t mind. I’m not interesting in being rich.
I just want to do something what will help people who are not so luckily as me. When I
come home again, I’m going to get a job as a teacher. Whatever I do, I wanted a job where
I can work with kids.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符合(^)，在该词下面写出该加的词。
修改：在错的词下划—横线，在该词下面写出改正后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
第四部分：
第一节：
Last Saturday the students of our class made a bike trip of a
small town .We set off earlier in the morning.
After getting to the town, we had visited some places of interest. At noon,
we had picnic near the town. Everybody was attracted by the beautifully scenery
and we took a lot of picture there. In the afternoon, some of us went fishing,
some rowed boats on the water, but others flew kites.
We both had a wonderful time! It was a pleasant trip for us,
during which the boys were offered the girls a lot of help.
We have learned to help, understand and sharing with others.
In a word, we have got quite a lot from it.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改l0处，多者(从第ll处起)不计分。
Modern technology takes us a lot of convenience, especially when it came to the Internet. You can find all kinds messages in just a few minutes on the Internet. It’s like going to a huge library without have to walk around ti find your books. Therefore,recently many people have been discussing the dangers of the Internet.There have been reports in the America about some people trying to steal others personal information for bad purposes. Finding information on the Net is easy,but not all information are good to society. For example ,you can find such information on how to kill people,how to break into a bank, many things like that．I’m afraid the problem will becomoe more seriously in the future.
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