Michaelwaswalkingalongthestree

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．

Today I tried cooking a simply dish myself．I like eating frying tomatoes with eggs，and I thought it must to be easy to cook．My mom told me how to preparing it．First I cut the tomatoes into pieces but put them aside．Next I broke the eggs into a bowl and beat them quickly with chopstick．After that I poured oil into a pan and turned off the stove．I waited patiently unless the oil was hot．Then I put the tomatoes and the beaten eggs into pan together．"Not that way，" my mom tried to stop us but failed．She was right．It didn't turn out as I had wished．

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．

注意：

1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．

I've had many dreams since I was a child． Now my dream is to opens a cafe． Though it may appear simple， it required a lot of ideas and efforts． What I want is not just an ordinarily cafe but a very special one． I want my cafe have a special theme such as like "Tang Dynasty"． In the cafe， customers will enjoy yourselves in the historical environment what is created for them． If I succeed in manage one， I will open more． I wish to have a chain of cafes in many different city． Each of my cafes will have a different theme and an unique style．

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．

I became interesting in playing football thanks to a small accident． One afternoon where I was in primary school， I was walking by the school playground． Suddenly football fell just in front of me but almost hit me． I stopped the ball and kicked it hardly back to the playground． To everyone′s surprising， the ball went into the net． All the football player on the playground cheered loudly， say that I had a talent for football． From now on， I started to play my football with classmates after school． I am a good player now．

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下面短文中有10处语言错误．请在有错误的地方增加、删减或修改某个单词．

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词．

删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉．

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词．

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多着（从第11处起）不计分．

When I was a very young children，my father created a regular practice I remember well years late．Every time he arrived home at end of the day，we'd greet her at the door．He would ask who we was and pretend not to knowing us，Then he and my mother would have had a drink while she prepared dinner and they would talk about his day and hers．While they chat，my father would lift my sister and me up to sit in the top of the fridge．It was both excited and frightening to be up there！

My sister and I thought he was so cool for putting us there．

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词。
注意：
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Everyone has a dream．We are on the way to achieve it whether the way is smooth or toughly．As Senior 3 student, I have the same dream as my classmates that I can be admitted to an ideal university．In the past three years, I have done everything I can to equip myself with that I have learnt from my teachers．Not only have I enjoyed the pleasure of study but also I have got closer to my dream．Anxious and pressure did discourage from me at times．Besides, with the encouragement of my teachers and classmates, I think I’ll make it．
I’m sure that there has still a long way to go to achieve my dream．No matter how challenged it is, I’ll make it come true．As the proverb said,” Where there’s a will, there’s a way．”

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