假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Mr Johnson,
I’m writing to tell you that I had a safety journey back to Beijing. Thanks to your kindness, I had a wonderfully time in Australia. It is my first time to go abroad and I was naturally a bit nervous when I was arrived. When I saw you at an airport, I knew from your warm smile that something would be all right. With your help, I visited so many places of interests in Australia, where impressed me a lot. I hope some day you will go to visit Beijing and I will act like a guide to show you around the city.
Yours,
Li Hua
短文改错（满分10分）
| After I finished the school this year，I began to |
91._________ |
| look for work. Now several month later， I still didn't |
92._________ |
| find the job that I was interested. Last Sunday morning |
93._________ |
| I received a phone call from a man calling him Mr. Smith. |
94._________ |
| He said to me on the phone， "I hear you do very |
95._________ |
| well in your studies. I may give a job for you." I entered |
96._________ |
| his office with a beaten heart. How I hoped that I |
97._________ |
| will go through the job -hunting talk today and he would |
98._________ |
| take me on as a lab assistant. But to my surprised， |
99._________ |
| what he said disappointing. He only needed a model. |
100.________ |
短文改错（满分10分）
| After I finished the school this year，I began to |
91._________ |
| look for work. Now several month later， I still didn't |
92._________ |
| find the job that I was interested. Last Sunday morning |
93._________ |
| I received a phone call from a man calling him Mr. Smith. |
94._________ |
| He said to me on the phone， "I hear you do very |
95._________ |
| well in your studies. I may give a job for you." I entered |
96._________ |
| his office with a beaten heart. How I hoped that I |
97._________ |
| will go through the job -hunting talk today and he would |
98._________ |
| take me on as a lab assistant. But to my surprised， |
99._________ |
| what he said disappointing. He only needed a model. |
100.________ |
每句只有一个错误。按下列情况改正: 该句多一个词，把多余的词用斜线( \ ) 划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉; 该句缺一个词，在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该句右边横线上写出该加的词;该句错一个词，在错的词下划一横线，在该句右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意:不要改动原句的意思。
61. Each time when we celebrate a festival it changes a little. 61.___________
62. Oprah Winfrey makes possible to talk about great moments and difficulties in people’s lives in her television shows.
62.___________
63. Mianyang lies to the northwest of Sichuan. 63.___________
64. Dustin Hoffman is famous as his role acting as a woman. 64.___________
65. Dated back to the Qin Dynasty, the traditional crosstalk shows have made people all over China roar with laughter for centuries.
65.___________
短文改错（共10小题;每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
Dear editor,
I am a high school student. I have problem to ask 66._________
you for help. A few days before, one of my very good 67._________
friend told me that he was going to leave school. 68._________
He said that he wanted to start his own’s business. I tried 69._________
my best to get him to change his mind, and I failed. 70._________
I realize it is difficult of me to persuade him. He 71._________
is not doing so good in his studies. The process is 72._________
more important than the result. Now there are only 73._________
90 days being left before the test. I am not sure 74._________
his decision is right or wrong. I needed your advice. 75._________
Gao Fei
第二卷（非选择题，35分）
Ⅴ．短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误，则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下画一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：每行只有一个错误；原行没有错的不要改。
One day I happen to find a chatting room in my QQ, 76．
there people were chatting in English．I tried to chat with 77．
some of them．To my surprised, I found the oral English 78．
of some students were better than mine． 79．
I asked him for advice and they told me to practice more 80．
on QQ．But every day after that I would spend one 81．
hour practice my oral English on QQ． 82．
Day by day I learned from many useful words and expressions． 83．
With time going by, I found that I could even 84．
communicate some college students freely． 85．
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