假定英语课上英语老师要求同桌之间互相修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该词下面写出该加的词。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词。
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
Generally speaking, I’m a person who have the ability to control myself. Whether at school and at home, I can be aware of the dos and don’ts and always focus on my study, so I am the one of the top students in my class. Besides, whenever I meet with anything or somebody unpleasant, I can calm down and only in this way can I get along good with others.
I think it is determination what is of great importance if you want to improve your self-control.
In order control yourself easily and effectively, you are supposed to make some rule to follow. Also you’d better ask others to keep an eye on yourself, which makes the difference in helping you be responsible to what you do.
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