假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I sometimes just wanted to sit in the dark. I hate to admit this, or sometimes when I’m feeling bad, I’ll lock myself in the bathroom, turn away the lights and just sit on the floor. I don’t know what. Maybe I feel comfortable and relaxed in totally darkness. Sometimes, I just stare into the darkness without think of anything. Maybe I’m sitting there waiting for someone show up. I also think of all kind of things sometimes. I will not only think of the things that they happened in the past, but imagine what will happen in a future. It really helps as I will be happier after that.
第II卷（非选择题，共35分）
第一部分 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
短文改错:
Han Han, a professionally rally(赛车) driver, best-selling author 1__________
and the China's most popular blogger, has been chosen as one 2__________
of “the 100 most influential people” by Time magazine. 3__________
Every year, Time selects hundreds of people included the leaders, artists 4__________
and icons, and encouraged its readers to vote. The weekly news 5__________
magazine, introduced Han as an author and a race car driver, 6__________
said Han was qualified to be on the list as good as Obama and Lady Gaga. 7__________
Han's first novel, that based on his experience as a high 8__________
school dropout, became a best seller in China and caused
a debate the quality of the country's education system. Han had 9__________
received much higher votes than any other candidates (候选人). 10__________
第二节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从11处起) 不计分。
Although it was autumn, but it was snowing in Tibet. It was such cold that our legs felt like blocks of ice. On the late afternoon, we found that our water bottles froze because cold weather. But we still enjoyed us during the journey. At one point, we were surprising to find ourselves cycling through clouds. In the valleys colorful butterflies fly around us. It was a great fun to cycle down the hills as it gradual became much warmer. So we had to change our warm coats for T–shirt and shorts.
III．短文改错
Last Sunday I saw the worst storm in years. It came
sudden and went on for over three hours. After lunch, I 41. _____
went into my room to have a rest. The air was hotter, and 42. _____
all is quiet. Then a strong wind started to blow into my 43. _____
room. Pieces of paper on my desk flew high into the air 44. _____
and some flew out the open window. As I ran out to catch 45. _____
them, big drop of rain began to fall. When I came back 46. _____
into house, it was raining harder and harder. I tried 47. _____
very hard to close the window. Then I heard a loudly 48. _____
crashing(碰撞的)sound from the back of the house. When I ran 49. _____
out to find that a big tree had fallen down and broke the 50. _____
英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，现在请你修改你同桌的作文。文中共有10处错误
要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词。
注意： 1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
Dear classmates,
Now I’d like to tell you why I learn English. I often read English aloud and try learn something important by hearts, which helps me remember it easily and form the good habit of thinking in English. I listen to a lot and talk with others in English. In this way, I was improved my spoken English. I keep a diary in English every day but my writing English is becoming better and better. I also try my best to master the necessary grammar. By this mean, I can express myself in English correct. That’s the way I have been learning English. I hope it will be useful to you.
That’s all. Thank you.
文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加出加一个漏字（^），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear manager,
I am a student of senior three. Last Sunday I went to shopping in your supermarket. Your service was very good, and I felt worried because there are some problem there. First, the windows of the walls are tightly closed so the fresh air cannot move in, that can easily lead to all kinds illnesses. Second, there is large quantities of goods on the third floor, but they are in a mess. It is not easy to find which I want to buy. In addition, the EXIT signs can’t be see easily, so if something terribly happened, it would be difficult for people to get in quickly. I hope you can make some improvements.
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