假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌系的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（ ）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线（ ），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
All hope was not lost. Soon after the quakes, the army sent 150,000 soldier to Tang Shan to help the rescue workers. Hundred of thousands of people were helped. The army organize teams to dig out those which were trapped and to bury a dead. To the north of the city, most of the 10,000 miners were rescued at the coal mines there. Workers built shelters for survivors whose homes have been destroyed. Fresh water were taken to the city by train, truck and plane. Slow, the city began to breathe again.
Last Sunday morning, when I was having a walk in the park near my home, I came across a crew make a new film with one of my favourite actor. I didn’t have my camera with me at that time, but I rushed back home to get. Unfortunately, by the time I got back, they have finished the scene and the actor couldn’t be seen everywhere. I was really disappointing and about to leave when he walked out a building. He was right there in the front of me! I couldn’t believe my luck---not only did I had my photo taken with him, but he signed his name on my shirt!
Dear Grandpa,
How are you those days? I have been missing you very ________
much after I went to college a year ago. Whenever I think of ________
the old days, I feel very happy. I still remember when I ________
was child, you always held me in your arms and told me stories ________
till I fall asleep. We often went to the fields to enjoy the pleasant________
View there. You told me the name of different plants and their________
Characteristics. Gradually, I became interesting in biology ________
And chose to learn biology when I entered into the college. Now________
my friend Ann, together with me, are going to do field study________
and the findings will be use as materials for our research. Since ________
we’ll do the study in our hometown, I hope to see you by then.
Yours
Daisy
Today is Sunday. I’ve been in Canada for two months.
This is the first time that I’ve been away my family for such a ______
long time. With the help of Katia, a roommate of me, I’ve _______
soon got used to live without my parents around. Katia, like _______
many other Russian girls are nice and lively. We became _______
friends shortly after we meet each other. Although her English _______
is a little hardly to understand, we enjoy chatting and we _______
usually talk a lot about our own family. We’re both surprised _______
that Chinese culture or Russian culture are so different. Now, _______
we are planning a small party for the next Sunday. There, Katia _______
will introduce me to some of her friends, one of who has been _______
to China several times. I just can’t wait.
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请再有错误的地方增加，删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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Patience is of great importance in our daily life. Once I waited a bus to come at a stop. 30 minutes past, but no bus came. Both sad and annoyed, I decided to walk on foot. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it in. Now whenever I am close to lose my patience, I’ll think of the experiences.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改 10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
One cold evening during the holiday season, a little boy about six or seven was standing out in the front of a store window. The little child has no shoes and his clothes were just rags. A young woman passes by saw the little boy and could read the desire in his pale blue eyes. She took the child by the hand and led him into the store. There she bought her some new shoes and a complete suit of warmly clothing. They walked back outside into the street, so the woman told the child to come home and have a happy holiday. The little boy looked her and asked how she was God. She smiled and replied that she was just one of His child.
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