第三卷：写作（短文改错，写作）
Part five: Proof Reading (10 pts.)
请仔细阅读下列短文并改正其中的10个错误。
I saw an accident happened on my way to home this afternoon. A girl was crossing the street on a zebra crossing while a young man drove a motorbike towards her. The young man saw the girl and tried to stop, and he drove too fast to stop. He hit the girl and fell off her motorbike. The girl was badly hurt and couldn’t move. The young man didn’t know how to do. I ran to a phone box nearby and dialed 110. Soon the police reached. They sent her hospital at once. One of the policeman talked to the young man and wrote something down while was talking. I think it is very dangerous to drive very fast.
下面每句都有一处语言错误，且错误只涉及一个单词的增加、删除和修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词,并按照上述要求修改，否则不予记分。This gift was the Amber Room, which was given this name because several tons of amber was used to make it.
Later, Catherine II had the Amber Room moved to a palace outside St Petersburg which she spent her summers.
An opinion is that someone believes is true but has not been proved.
I lived in which you call “Ancient Greece” and I used to write about the Olympic Games a long time ago.
Only athletes who has reached the agreed standard for their event will be admitted as competitors.
Atlanta was a Greek princess. She was very beautiful and could run faster than any other man in Greece.
She was married with a young engineer in June.
The sun rose highly in the sky and it got hotter and hotter.
The result is not very important to us, but if we do win, then so much better.
There was no wonder that Kip Keino became the only Kenyan sportsman ever to appear on the cover of the world famous sports magazine Sports Illustrated.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Christie was one of my best friend at my high school. At that time, we often spend time together. Thank to her help, I made a great progress in my study. Last year, she decided to study board. In another words, we would be separated for a long time. Before her leaving, I prepared a gift to show my best wishes to him. She said it was the best gift she has ever had. From then on, we’ve kept touch with each other through e-mails. I look forward to see her again in the near future.
下面短文中共有10处语言错误，请在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不给分。
Dear schoolmates,
In order to get high school students to attaching importance to the environment and improve our sense to protect the environment, and China Daily is planning to hold an interestingly knowledge contest． A contest starts on October 14th and end on 31st． Remember, you can take the contest in China Daily newspaper, that is very popular among high school student． The answer sheet must cut from the newspaper and sent to China Daily after the deadline．
Please pay more attention to the related information of the contest and take an active part in them on time．
Students' Union
Having a dream is of great importance. Your dreams are ordinary and realistic. I hope I willadmitted into a top university and become a good doctor after I will graduate from university. Ihoped one day I can find a cure for cancer. I hope those whom love me and those whom I lovewill be healthy and live happy every day. To realize my dreams, I will take more exercises to buildup my body. I will try my best to focus time and energy to my study. I must work hard at mylessons or be fully preparing for the entrance exam.
假定英语诹上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改，
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用（＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
On the first day when I went to high school，I felt exciting．After 9 years’study, I felt I was so closely to university．During the first year, I made many friends．I got to know all of my classmates．Because the school work was tough．I shared happiness and sorrow for my friends．When second year came，I was arranged to other class．I was worried that no one could talk to me，but I made new friends quickly．Now that it was the last year of my high school life，but I'm determined to study more harder and make greater progress．High school life is challenging for me，but I won’t give out．
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