假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(
)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线(___)，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Saturday I went to the library as usually. At about noon, I was enjoying my reading near a lake while suddenly I hear someone crying for help. I went up to see what was happened I was shocking to find a little child struggling in the water in the distance while many peoples were standing by without doing anything. Without any hesitation, I had pushed through the crowd as I took off my coat, but jumped into the water quickly. I managed to reach him and carried him back to safety. To his great relief, the kid was saved.
I was proud what I had done. I hope everyone can give a hand when someone else is in need.
短文改错
I used to feeling pressured to do well in exams. I was such afraid of falling behind that I kept thinking about studying every minute of the day. The pressure makes me out of breath. To my disappointed, the more worried I was about my studies, the less effective I became. Later, I realized I just took pressure too serious. So I tried taking things easy by taking part in various activity out of class, enjoying music and even daydreaming about fun things.
To my delight, this worked! Gradually，I became more anxious about exams and began to take pleasure in my studies. Pressure cannot avoided. What counts is how to deal with properly, but above all, how to turn it into pleasure or challenge.
Error correction. ( 15 points )
One day, Mary stopped outside the shoe-shop and looked into the _______
window. For some times, she fixed her eyes on a pair of high boots _______
on display. “They are exactly I’ve been looking for,” she thought, _______
“I would like to buy a pair of boots as that in the window.” _______
After ask about the price, Mary decided to try a pair on. While _______
the shop-assistant was helping him put the boots on, she kept _______
looking at Mary’s stockings which was made of fine white lace (网眼).____
“Excuse me for asking,” the assistant said at last, “but where _______
did you get these stockings? They are the most latest fashion”. _______
“They were given to me by my grandma!” Mary said proud. ________
短文改错（共10 小题，每小题1分，满分10分）
My brother Tom was very selfish when he was little boy. He did not want share things with
other people. For example, when he bought a chocolate cake, he put them in a secret place,
that I couldn’t find. Then he ate it all by himself. He never helped other. He said he is busy.
In other words, a game of tennis made him very busy. He did not care if something that he did
it made people angry. For instance, one night he played strongly and loud music till four o’clock
in the morning. But he is difference now. He often helps grandma with houseworks, helps mom
with cooking and helps his classmates with their lessons.
短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）
My friend Jack who was always working hardly so that he could earn enough to buy a car of his own. He used to say, “My life will be better when I get a nicer car.” It took him more than three years to make his dreams come true. However, Jack was not satisfied with what he has achieved. He worked even harder, hoping that he would able to buy a big house with a beautiful garden. One day, I told himself that happy is a journey, not a destination. Try to do what you like and enjoy what you can enjoy at the present, and you will feel regretful when you are too old to do anything.
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：
如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个（√）
如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词
该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词
注意：原行没有错的不要改During the weekend I traveled by air the first time
in my life. I generally travel by train and bus. It is
both cheaper and safer. But this was the short journey.
In the beginning I did not feel very happily, but this
feeling does not last long. The journey was very exciting.
I was soon high up in the sky among the clouds. The views
of mountains, fields and river were very interesting.
I enjoyed your short and comfortable journey very much.
This experience has shown what traveling by plane is
actually the safest way of make a journey.
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