假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两赴，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It is universally known that opportunity is important, and you could not seize one without being equipped with competitive forces, which you could approach success.
One year ago, I studied in the high school and whenever I failed an exam, I felt frustrated and thought it was a bad luck which contributed to my failure. At that time, when my father asked me whether
I prepared for the exam and mastered the basic knowledge or not, I felt ashaming and couldn’t say a single word. From then on, I grasped every chance to learn how to make good use of my study resource. With the improving on basic reading and calculating skills, I succeeded the College Entrance Exam.
Only then did I realize how important it was to make a fully preparation.
下面短文中有10处语法错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意： 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多
者（从第11处起）不计分。
| 例如： It was very nice to get your invitation to spend ∧ weekend with you. Luckily the  I are completely free then, so I’ll to say “yes”. I’ll arrive in Bristol at around 8 p.m. in am on Friday evening |
One rainy day while I was walking home with one of my friend, a truck came to a stop besides us. The driver put the window down and offered us a umbrella because he found we were wet through. I stood there and couldn’t believe in that a complete stranger is so thoughtful. The man insisted, so I grateful accepted the offer, thanked him and watched the truck disappear down the road. T
his man might need the umbrella himself, and he preferred to give it to everyone else. It was a lesson to us that it was possible give without expect anything in return.
假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中有10处错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从11处起)不计分。
Welcome to the Polynesian Cultural Centre! You are entering a world of funs! My name is called Tera, a Polynesian name which mean “the sun”. I’m very glad you can come today and learn about some of the amazing Polynesian way. As you can see, here behind myself is one of their boats. To build a boat like this, you needed a very tall, straight tree. You first cut down the tree and remove the branch.
Then you cut the tree in half so you have two long pieces of woods. You use one piece to make the boat. Remove the inside for a person to sit. Take the bark off the outside of the boat and puts oil on it so it will easily go through the sea. Some Polynesian boats have sails.
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从11处起) 不计分。
As is known to all that our students of today have to fix our attention on our lessons, so we know few of society. A holiday is the best time and the best chance to make up for that. Take a part-time job is a good form of social practice. That we have learned in books and in class can’t have same importan
t effect on us as what we have learned through personal practice. In social practice, we can surely make a progress in both knowledge or practical ability. Beside, when we take a part-time job, we may got paid more or less to help our family. Thus, I will say a senior school student should take a part-time job in their holidays, if possible.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词作斜线（\）划掉。 修改：在错词下划横线，并在该词下写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
One evening，two young men were walking in the street. They tried to find a chance to steal
everything. The clock strikes twelve. Most people were in bed. Quickly they came to a house, so it
seemed that everyone in the house had fallen sleeping. Standing at the front gate, one man said in
English to the other at a low voice, “You wait here. I will go around to the front door and then get
into the house.” Suddenly out of the house ran a dog , barked at them. The two men were very
afraid and ran away as fast as possibly. They didn’t stop until they had got to a lonely place. One
man said to the other in surprise, “It’s too bad. I had thought that the dog could understand
English.”
Dear Mr. and Mrs. Brown,
I’m writing to you from my home in China. I returned
home safe and sound. When thinking of the wonderful day ______________
I spent in New Orleans, I just can’t help think of both of ______________
you. It was very kind for you to have provided everything ______________
to make my stay there such happy experience. I’ve ______________
learned so many, not only English but also culture. And I ______________
really enjoy a great deal, the fun and laughter we shared ______________
them with each other. Thank you very much. I’ll always ______________
remember this trip as well as your kind. ______________
Welcome to China when it’s convenient for you. I’ll be very ______________
glad to show you around. And you’ll surely have a pleased ______________
visit here.
I’ll keep in touch and write you later. Please take care!
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
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