假定英语课上老师要求同桌中间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:把缺词处叫个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Brown,
Last summer I take a part-time job in the International Camp for children.I have told one more worker will be needed in this year and I think you are fit for it.How about join us? The camp is at the foot of a small hill closed to a river.It is such beautiful a place! We can hear birds singing happy all around.Everybody sleeps in tents, that is very exciting.We usually work only five hours a day, so we will have plenty of spare time visit the area and have a fun.I am sure it will be an unforgettable experience.If you have interests in it, reply to me soon.
Yours, Mary