假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（／）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线（___），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
This morning on my way to school I was deep moved by what I saw outside a bank. An old man was counting his money in the front of the bank. Suddenly a young man came running and knocked him down. To make things bad, his money was lying in all direction. In no time the people around rush to pick the money up while the old man stood there, not know what to do. Surprisingly, everyone gave back the money they had just picked. The old man counted the money again and found that not a single bill was missed. To my great joy, there are now a lot of nice people in your life. It’s true what honesty is more important than money!
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。该行缺一个词：把缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加词。该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改词。
It is real a good chance to have all of you here. ____________
We have spent several precious weekend in learning __________
in the English Club. Because we have been members ___________
for a short period of time, we have made a great progress. ___________
That is because we are all very much active and the __________
activities are not only enjoyable and also helpful. Besides, ___________
the foreign teachers here work hard and try his best to make____________
the activities lively and interested. I am very pleased to say ___________
that all of us greatly improved our spoken English so far. I ____________
am looking forward to see all of you again in the near future.___________
Jimmy lives in London and began swimming a few months ago.
He likes swimming, and often goes to the swimming pool near by his_____
house with his mother and swims there for a hour or so. ______
He was six year old last week, and his mother said, “You ______
swim quite good now, but you have never seen the sea, my _____
child, haven’t you? Your father and I are going to take you _____
there on Saturday, and you are going to swimming in the sea. _______
It isn’t cold now, and it’s much nice than a swimming pool.” _____
Jimmy’s father and mother brought him to the sea in their _______
car on Saturday, but they stopped at the side of a small ________
harbor(港口). Jimmy got out and looked at the sea for long ______
time, but wasn’t happy. Then he said to his mother,
“Which is the shallow end, mother?”.
As the College Entrance Examination is drawing nearby, some students would rather expect
good luck than to make every effort to study．They think success results good luck．Whether they can be admitted to key universities depend on luck．However, others insist that diligence is a mother of success．Only by working hard can they achieve what they want．Since they fail sometimes, they don’t give up, for they believe that success lies in our own hands．As for me, I’m in favor of the latter opinion．Luck doesn’t come alone．It goes hand by hand with hard working．Sometimes, some students are lucky enough to succeed, but such luck won’t last long because it is not basing on their own abilities．
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出应加的单词。
此行错一个词：在错词下画一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的单词。
注意：原行没有错误的不要改。
My classmate，Joseph，is at present in hospital
with a breaking leg．He was walking to school the other 1．
day when he let a bicycle ran right into him．He never 2．
watches where he is going，so he often gets into the trouble． 3．
But he is having a nice time there．He has a comfortable 4．
room，patiently nurses，and a great deal of time to read． 5．
Some friends of his go to see him every day，they take him 6．
lots of good book and fresh fruit．He is not losing any time 7．
from school because he is busy study what he has 8．
missed in class．The doctor says he is recovering fast than 9．
expected and will be out of hospital a few weeks． 10．
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该
行右边横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(
)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改
Dear Sally,
Now I’d like to tell you something about my part-time job in this ___________
summer vacation, in which I worked like a guide in a travel agency. __________
The work was interesting but tired. I think it was helpful to work this ___________
holiday. This was the first time that I have earned money on my own. ___________
I’ve come to understand how hard my parents work to support for _________
the family . I used to keep on ask them for money, but now I’ll never __________
waste money and learn to share worry with my parent. I’ve learnt how ___________
to get along well with others. What’s worse, I’ve gained some working _________
and social experience and I have learnt something can’t be learnt from ___________
textbooks. All this will be good for my future. In the word, I had a __________
wonderful and valuable summer vacation.
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