假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I was used to feel sleepy in class and couldn’t focus on the lessons the teachers give. As a result, not only did I do bad in my studies, but also my health went from bad to worse, about which I was often scolded by my parents. I was also annoying about my situation. About half a year ago, followed the head teacher’s advice, I began to participate in some sport activities and kept on playing basketball for 45 minutes and so every day till today. Now my health has been greatly improved, so at the same time, I’ve made good progress in all my lessons. Physical exercise has changed me into an entire new person!
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改错（满分10分，每题1分）
Most families in China hoped their single children will 76. _______
have a happy future, so they are very strict in their children. 77. _______
So do teachers in schools! Many children are given so much 78. _______
homework that they hardly have any spare time have sports. 79. _______
The children are forbidden to do anything but to study. No 80. _______
wonder so many children are tired of lessons. Some even 81. _______
attack or kill his parents and teachers! I believe many people 82. _______
already read this kind of news in newspapers or magazines. 83. _______
Shouldn’t we draw lesson from the accidents? Now our 84. _______
government are carrying out a plan to solve the education problems. 85. _______
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第II卷（非选择题，共50分）
第三部分 写作（共两节，满分50分）
第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
The day after Thanksgiving is the start the holiday shopping 66. __________
season. One place where is very busy today is a large shopping 67. __________
mall in Bloomington of the USA. In fact, it is one of the 68. _________
largest shopping and entertainment center in the world. 69. __________
In this mall, there are more than five hundreds stores, including four 70. ________
large department stores. It has sixty eaten places and a big aquarium. 71. _______
You can walk along it and so watch sharks eat or see a reef up close. 72. ________
The mall also has much museums, theaters, and a place where 73. ________
people can get married. Mall spokesman Daniel saying that 74. ________
millions of people visits the mall every year from all over the world. 75. _________
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第二节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
After read your advertisement, I want to offer 76．_________
myself for the position. I’m twenty years old, 77．_________
male, 1.78metres tall, strong and health. I will 78．_________
graduate Nanjing University this year. I have been 79．_________
learning English for ten years. My spoken
English is very much good and I can write 80．_________
good article. I have won several prizes in 81．_________
English contests. I have made a great deal of 82．_________
inventions, most of them have been put into practice. 83．_________
but I can use the computer skillfully. If I can 84．_________
get the job, I’ll try my best do it well. Thank 85．_________
you for your kindness.
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第二节：短文改错（共10小题; 每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误在该行右边横线上画一个勾(∨)；如有错误(每一行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线(＼)划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Dear fellow students,
Our school is aimed to build a “harmonious campus” .
As a high school students, we should behave ourselves. But 76.
some students are badly behaved. They threw rubbish about 77.
and listen MP3 or sleep in class. A few boys even smoke and copy 78.
other students homework. I think it has a bad effect on their health as 79.
good as their study. A “harmonious campus” should have civilized 80.
students. So we should be strict on ourselves. Of course, study is the 81.
first. But we should study hardly. In order to build a harmonious 82.
study atmosphere, they must develop good habits. If everyone 83.
makes a contribution to build our campus, I’m sure 84.
our school will become beautiful and harmonious. 85.
Yours,
Li Qiang
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误在该行右边横线上画一个勾(∨)；如有错误(每一行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线(＼)划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Dear fellow students,
Our school is aimed to build a “harmonious campus” .
As a high school students, we should behave ourselves. But
some students are badly behaved. They threw rubbish about
and listen MP3 or sleep in class. A few boys even smoke and copy
other students homework. I think it has a bad effect on their health as
good as their study. A “harmonious campus” should have civilized
students. So we should be strict on ourselves. Of course, study is the
first. But we should study hardly. In order to build a harmonious
study atmosphere, they must develop good habits. If everyone
makes a contribution to build our campus, I’m sure
our school will become beautiful and harmonious.
Yours,
Li Qiang
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