请你修改一下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last November a English forum was held in Busan International High School of South Korea. Students from eight country took part in the forum representing their schools. I was one of the students in our school who was lucky enough to attend it. At the opening ceremony of the forum, students from Busan International High School play a lot of Korean traditional instruments, some of them were really new to us. The forum was very succeed. Every team did a good job and they highly thought of. During our stay in Korea, what impressed on us most was that Koreans love eating kimchi very much. Besides, in my opinion, it isn’t as deliciously as I had imagined.
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：
如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个（√）
如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词
该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词
注意：原行没有错的不要改During the weekend I traveled by air the first time
in my life. I generally travel by train and bus. It is
both cheaper and safer. But this was the short journey.
In the beginning I did not feel very happily, but this
feeling does not last long. The journey was very exciting.
I was soon high up in the sky among the clouds. The views
of mountains, fields and river were very interesting.
I enjoyed your short and comfortable journey very much.
This experience has shown what traveling by plane is
actually the safest way of make a journey.
短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）
Rose wanted a job. She went to many offices and she didn’t like any of them. One day she saw a board in an office read: “This office needs a typist whom can type 200 words a minute.” Rose was exciting. When Rose went to the manager’s office, the man was writing something. Rose knocked at the door and the manager raised her head. “Do you need a typist?”asked Rose. “Yes!” he said. Rose clapped her hand. She couldn’t help saying, “OK! How much will you pay for me every month?” The manager thought for a while and said, “I will pay you 77 dollars for first three months. Then I will pay you 30 dollars every month.” Rose smiled and answer, “Great! I will come and work here three months late.” The manager was speechless.
请你修改以下作文，文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除、或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错词的下面划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：
1．每次错误以及修改均限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者从第十一处起不计分。
Li Ming and Li Juan study very hardly. They do extremely well all the subjects. Li Juan decides to attend in Sichuan University while Li Ming preferred Beijing University. It makes them differ from the most students is that they don’t go to school. In fact, they have never been to school. Since kindergarten, we have studied at home. Neither of them feels they have missed anything by taught at home all the time. Like many people received home schooling in Chengdu, and they feel they are lucky.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(﹨) 画掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I go abroad for further studies half a year ago.I received a lot of present.All were wrapped in colour paper.Among them was two presents which really interested in me.My sister bought me the book with colour pictures about body language and with words about customs of differently countries in it.My brother gave me a note, it read,”My present for you has been put in my bedroom.” When I hurried into my bedroom,I found a box in it.Open the box,I found a pocket computer.I was very glad.I understood these two presents would be great help to me in improving my English.
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
Never shall I forget the first English lesson giving by Miss Liu. One Monday morning , when she entered into the classroom, we found that she was a young and beautiful lady. Then she introduced her and said they shouldn’t call her Teacher Liu but Miss Liu. Late, she let us go to the blackboard and said something about ourselves in English in turn. When it was my turn, I felt too shy that I didn’t dare to say anything before the class. She went up to me and said kind, “Don’t be afraid. I believe you can do well.” At last, I went to the blackboard. She praised me for that I had done.
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