假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同
桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Recently, some college students are busy finding variety of methods to make money during their free time. Some people believed that it is great. In such a competitive society, experience is becoming very more and more important. Doing part-time jobs are a good way to get experience. And it also helps to reducing parents’ financial stress. Others, therefore, argue that students’ duty is nothing but study. On the one hand, part-time jobs may have a negative effect in their studies. On the other hand, students may do something wrong because they are so young to tell good from bad. In my opinion, as soon as they arrange their time reasonably, we are sure to get good grades and work experience.
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（∨）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词作斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
短文改错
| Nowadays more and more people are sending their children, even middle school children, overseas for farther study. Some people think their |
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| children can receive a better education and learn foreign language |
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| as well. The most valuable thing is what they can learn to depend |
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| on themselves and improving their understanding of the world. |
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| But some people are not in favour for this. They think studying |
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| abroad cost over ten times as much money as in China. Besides, |
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| children are too young to take care of them. Many parents |
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| worry the safety of their children. What’s more, they might follow bad |
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| examples. In my opinion, the government should set up various schools |
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| and colleges to meet with the needs of people. |
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短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线
上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下面画一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
Carlos was born in Manila in 1950, at the age of two 76．_________________
week he was taken by his father, a musician, to the United 77．_________________
States by the sea. He spent his first ten years in the American 78．_________________
Southland that he attended school. Between the ages of 10 and 18, 79．_________________
he travelled in the Southern and Western Atlantic areas, living in 80．_________________
Florida and had graduated from his school in 1968. Early in his life 81．_________________
he had a great interested in music instruments and in 1965, he 82．_________________
learned to play the piano and quick became an expert on it. 83．_________________
Since he graduation from Florida State University in 1973. 84．_________________
he has been a famous pianist. He is not marry, saying that 85．_________________
his music school comes first.
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正短文的错误，对标有题号的每一行做出判断，如无错误，在该行右边的横线上打一个勾（∨）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词作斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
短文改错
| In a national spelling contest in America, 11-year-old |
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| girl was asked to spell a certain word. But with her softly |
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| voice the judges were sure if she spelled the word with letter |
78. _________ |
| A and E . They talked it over and finally decided to simply |
79. _________ |
| ask her what she had said. Immediately the girl knew he had |
80. _________ |
| mis-spelled the word. But instead of lying and told the judges |
81. _________ |
| she had said the correct letter, she told the truth which |
82. _________ |
| she had said the wrong letter, so she had lost the contest. |
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| As the girl walked off the stage, the audience stood |
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| to their foot clapping to applaud her honesty. |
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第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节：短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）
Last Sunday, my father invited his colleagues to our home for a
dinner party, included his boss. However, my three-year-old sister 76.
stared at my father’s boss sitting across from her all time during 77.
the dinner. He can hardly eat because of her stare. So embarrassed 78.
was the boss so that he checked his tie, touched his face 79.
and look at himself in the mirror. Even so, nothing stopped her 80.
staring at him. He tried to pay not attention to my sister, 81.
and finally it was too much for him. He couldn’t help asking 82.
her, “How are you staring at me?” Everybody present had noticed 83.
her behavior and the table went quietly for her response. My 84.
sister replied, “My daddy said you are a big eater and I don’t 85.
want to miss it!”
第Ⅱ卷(共35分)
第四部分：写作(共两节，满分35分) 、，，
第一节：短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：
如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√)I如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下画一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
As we know that, TV plays an important part in our 76
daily life. It’s quicker and more conveniently to get 77
information from TV than from newspapers. Providing 78
us with lively and interesting moving pictures, TV enabled 79
us not only to see what is happening in the world but 80
learn many things, included foreign languages. So it 81
is not reasonable to forbid students to watch TV. And 82
watching TV too long is not good. Sitting in the front of TV 83
all day does harm to our eyes and waste our time for study. 84
So we should take a correct attitude to students watch TV. 85
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