假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文，文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线划掉；
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
In the summer holiday, we travelled to Qingdao and paid visit to my uncle there. It’s a long and bored journey. But the moment I arrived, I fall in love with the city. It’s such beautiful a city that I can hardly find any word to describe it. The streets are cleaning and the sky is blue. If you walk along the coast, you can feel the wind to blowing on your face. The sea is vast and sometimes you can find a boat or a ship. You may also do some fishing as far as it is permitted. Moreover, I think the driver there drive too fast in the street. You can never be too careless when crossing the street.
One afternoon,when I was on my way home, the sky
changed suddenly.Dark cloud were gathering. I began
to feel worrying because I didn’t have either a raincoat
or umbrella.It soon started to rain heavily
Just as I was hurrying home,I heard of someone calling
me from behind.I turned to have a look and find that
it was Jasime,a good neighbor of my,He immediately
offrerd to share his umbrella with me.We walked all
the way home.With Jasime’s help,I would have got
wet to the skin. How much thankful I was for his help!
Different people have different ideas about music.
For me,I like rock music because it’s so exciting.But
my favorite rock band,the“Foxy Ladies”,are one of
the most famous rock band in the world.I also like
the pop music.My classmate Li Lan loves dance music
because she enjoys in dancing.My best friend,Jane,
likes Jazz music and she thinks Jazz is real cool.
My brother also likes rock much,thinking them amazing.
But my mother thinks rock is boring.“I like some relaxed
music, ”she says. That’s she likes country music,I think
下面文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线＼划掉。
修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者从第11处不计分。
I together with my parents went to the wildlife park last Sunday. There were lots of vlsitors stand before the ticket window. We waited a long tine and buy three tickets. In the Tiger Mountain of the park, I was too eager to see the fierce frightened animals that I quickened my steps through the crowd. Unfortunate, I got separated into my parents. I had hard time looking for them, and I had no luck. Wadering in the park, I felt alone without any compantons. Worse still, I had no money, so I had to walk home, covering as much as 5 kilometer.
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断；如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）。如有错误，则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错词下画一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词
I began to learn English in reading and listening. _____________
My study were limited by the poor conditions. ____________
As I paid more attention to read, I found that ____________
it didn’t take me long at all remember a large ____________
quantity of words and sentence structures. This ____________
rapid increase in the number of words I know made ____________
it is possible for me to read books in English. ____________
My reading ability was great improved. _____________
Now, I have come to know that things about the ____________
culture, society, history and people of America or England. _____________
In 1972, the United Nations hold a meeting in Sweden _________
to share ideas about ways t
o take better care of for the __________
earth．At the summit, people from more than one hundreds __________
countries discussed some of the important problems faced __________
our planet．Since then, several Earth Summits had been held. __________
In 2002, the Earth Summit was held in Johannesburg. _________
One of the main theme was “sustainable development”, or __________
the question what we can continue developing the world __________
without damage the environment．Most of the speakers __________
talked the three biggest killers in the world. __________
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