假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I used to be a very self-centered person, but in the past two years I really changed. I have started to think about other people after I think about myself. I am happy that I am becoming the different person.
I think my change started when I was at Palomar College. At first, I just want to get my degree and be left alone. I thought I was smarter than everyone else, so I hardly ever talked to anyone in my classes. By the end of my first semester, I was really lonely. That seemed as if everyone besides me had made friend and was having fun. So I tried an experiment. I started asking people around me how they were doing, and whether they were having trouble, I offered to help. That was real a big step for me. By the end of the year, I had several new friends, two of them are still my best friends today.
第Ⅱ卷
第四部分 写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节 短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
I was anxiously expected your letter, and at last 76. _________
it has reached me. I am very glad to know that 77. _________
everyone at home is enjoying good health as usually. 78. _________
Things here are same now as they were before. The 79. _________
final examination will take place in next week. So 80. _________
I am now busy preparing my lesson. It’s nice 81. _________
to think that the summer vacation was drawing 82. _________
near. I can’t say how many I want to see you all again. 83. _________
I am looking forward to spend summer days with you. 84. _________
Give my love to Father, Mother and someone at home. 85. _________
第Ⅱ卷（非选择题 共35分）
第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节 短文改错（满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）;如有错误（每行只有一个错误）则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
该行少一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在右边横线上写出所加的词。
该行错一个词：在错词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正的词。
注意：原行没错的不要改。
I visited my aunt in the countryside near the city last week．
I was surprised to see that great changes had been taken place 76________
in the countryside．Take my aunt’s family for example．We 77_______
supply precious trees and flowers to the stores in the city and 78________
have over ten workers working for themselves．Their family’s 79_______
income reached as much 100 000 yuan last year．Not only 80______
did they have a house, a car and computers, they can also afford 81______
a trip abroad every year．When asking what else they needed 82______
most, they said that they wanted to learn a few English so that 83______
they could do business with foreigners directly．To their delighted, 84______
my cousin an use that he has learned from university to help 85_______
them with overseas trade．
第二卷写作
第四题：短文改错。（按格式去改，每题1分，共10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉；在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉；该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）；在该行右边横线上写出该加的词；该行错一个词，在错的词下划一个横线；在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Dear Lily,
Thanks very much on inviting me to your birthday 76_____
party on Sunday. I’d like very much go but 77_____
I’ll have an examination in Monday morning. 78_____
It is very important but I can’t afford to fail 79_____
it. I’ll spend all the whole weekend reading 80_____
and prepare for it. So I’m really sorry that 81_____
I won’t be able to come this time. I hope you 82_____
can understand me. I’ll take this chance to wish 83_____
you wonderful time on your birthday. Happy 84_____
birthday, Lily, and many return of the day. 85_____
第Ⅱ卷
第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个钩（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
I am a high school student. A few days before, 76. ________
one of my very good friend told me that he was going 77. ________
to stop the school. He said that he wanted to start his 78. ________
own business. I tried my best to get him change his mind, 79. ________
but I failed.
I know it is difficult of him to change his mind. 80. ________
He is not doing so good in his studies, yet I want to 81. ________
insist that he give it a try. The process is more 82. ________
important than the results. Now there are only 60 days leaving 83. ________
before that test. I am not sure that his decision is right 84. ________
or wrong. I needed your advice. 85. ________
第二节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：
如无错误，该行右边横线上画一个勾(√)；
如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Good health is the most valuable possession a person can have, 76. _______
so one can not regard good health as certain to happen. It’s 77. ________
important to remember that body needs proper care in order 78. ________
to be healthy. There are three things that a person can do stay 79. ________
in good shape. Firstly, eat the right foods is good for health. 80. ________
Vegetables and fruits are specially important. Enough sleep 81. ________
is also important. Finally, get plenty of exercises. Sports are 82. ________
not only good for one’s body, but it can also help build 83. ________
friendship with others p
eople. If everyone were to do the three, 84. ________
the world would be a happier and healthy place. 85. ________
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