Li Yue and Zhang Hua went to︿nursing home and did some voluntary work on May Day. At their arrival, they were warm welcomed. They presented the elderly people with flowers and fruits. Then, they started working at once, cleaning the windows and swept the floor. Everything done, they sit in the yard chatting with the elderly. When it was time for the volunteer to leave, the elderly thanked them for their kindness. Li Yue and Zhang Hua were very happy because of what they did bring joy to others. It also enriched our own experience. They made a promise which they would come again to see the elderly whenever they were free.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (∧) ，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线 ( \ ) 划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者 (从第11处起) 不计分。
Mr Wang is my physics teacher. He has 1.75 meters in the height. He was born on November 4, 1952. So he is a middle-aged man. He graduated Qinghua University in 1983. After graduation, he becomes a middle school teacher. He has been taught physics for more than 20 years. He is very succeed as a teacher. He has been given a lot of honor. He not only is a good teacher in physics but also speak English and Russian very well. In his spare time, he likes reading books, collect stamps and listening music. Also, Mr. Smith is kind-hearted.
I eager to go to college because I know there is so many to learn about the world
and about human beings. Knowledge is source of pleasure for me. I want to study at a
college for fun to knowledge; I know college education can prepares me better for my
future. Better education mean, more often then not, better jobs, better opportunities and
better choices. I want to go to college because I know that our parents and other people
care for me will be happy with that. Unless I can study at a nice university, I will make
them happy. I’d like not let them down. That’s why I must go to college.
第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
This morning I went to the shop to change
the coat I bought it yesterday. But the salesgirl ________
treated me coldly. At first, she didn’t admit that the ________
coat sold in her shop and then she said I made ________
it dirty. She gave various excuse to refuse my ________
request. So I got angrily and quarreled with her. ________
Then the manager turned up and asked how was ________
the matter. Before I told him the whole thing, ________
he said sorry for me and criticized the salesgirl. ________
At last, they changed another coat for us. With ________
satisfaction I take the new coat home happily. ________
第一节短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
People communicate in words. Do you think you can communicate without words? A smile on your face show you are happy but friendly. Tears in eyes tell the others that you are sad. When you put up your hand in class, the teacher knows you want say something. Other things should also carry messages. For example, a sign at the bus stop helps you to know which bus to carry. Signs on the door tell you if to go in or out. Have you ever seen that there are a lot of sign around you and that you receive messages from it all the time?
短文改错：（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
Students go to colleges and universities to have valuable experiences and learn to live in their own. Go to colleges often means having the opportunity to meet with different peoples from different parts of the country. They learn to communicating and co-operate with each other. For most students, we guess, it is the first time that they had been away home. They are faced by many new situations and have to learn to solve them independently, making decisions on our own and dealing with various things themselves. So colleges and universities help with them grow up.
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