假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（
），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My name is Bruce Hall. I'm happy to being your English teacher. First, I'd like to tell you
something about myself. I was born in Paris which the winter is cold. So I went to a warm place—Egypt and lead camels for tourists under the pyramids. Before some time，I went to study at California State University，with the money I had earned it in Egypt. Late，I went to Salt Lake City and became high school teacher. It is five years since I came to China as a teacher of English. My classes are designed special to meet the needs of each student whether they want to prepare for various exam or generally learn to speak English. So if you have any difficulties in learning English，please don't hesitate to come to me.
仔细阅读下列句子，每句中均有一个错误，请找出并在横线上改正，请按下列情况改正：
该句多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（ / ）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
该句缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该句错一个词：把错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
A day, I came across an old friend in a museum.
My friend was in his sixties. Therefore, he looked so
young. I asked him how he stayed young.
He told me take exercise was a good way
to keep health, such as, having a walk.
His office was 2 miles far away from his home .Every day
he went to work on foot instead taking a bus. He
also gave me some other suggestion to be in good
health. He thought how fun it was to do sports.
Heard what he said, I decided to take action.
此题要求改正文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断： 如无错误, 在改行的后面划对号 (√); 如有错误 (每行只有一个错误), 则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线 (\ ) 划掉, 在该行的右边的横线上写出该词, 并也用斜线划掉。
此行少一个词：在缺词处加一个
漏字符号 (∧), 在该行右边的横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线, 在该行的右边写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Ye
sterday we went plant trees on the hill near _____
our school. The boys was made to dig pits(坑).The _____
girls were told to plant the young trees into the pits. _____
All of us worked very hardly. Soon we were all wet _____
with sweat. After the young trees planted, we _____
began to water it. The water was at the foot of ____
the hill. But we stood in line to pass pails(桶) _____
of water from one to other up to the hill. ____
We did not finish water the trees until it _____
was dark. We feel very happy. ____
假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My spare time is full of interested activities. I read all kinds of books in reading-room whenever I have time. I learn much in the library than in class in this way. Sports and games keep me health enough to deal with all difficulties. My favourite was volleyball among all games. I often play with volleyball after school. Sometime I go in for social practice with my classmates outside school. Thus I can gain some social ex
periences.
Out-of-class activities are quite necessary for our students. Through these activities we can learn many things that can’t learned in class.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改
。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Mr. Johnson,
I’ve learned from a newspaper that some clerks are wanting in your company. I am eager to being one of them. So I am writing the letter. My name is zhang Hua. I was born in the Hebei Province and I am in good health. I’ve just graduated in the Computer Department of Wuhan University. I did very good in all subjects and I am special good at computer studies and English. I can read science books in English and doing some writing in English as well. Beside, I know a little French. And in my spare time ,I enjoy playing basketball. As is said that your company is very famous and I’ll very glad if you let me work for it. My telephone number is 027-89276628．I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一篇作文。文 中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉；
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I very sympathize with you and the great tr
ouble you are suffering.I suggest you to
Communicate your trouble to your teachers and classmates so as to get help from them..
You are not supposing to think about your exams all the time,that only makes you more
stressed out. Somehow, your should think about the progress you made in your study.
That will surely increase your confidence.In addition, I suggest you to doing more exercise in your
spare time to relieve your stress because sports will too help better at night.As for me, I
would like to listen to classic music If I have time.
I wish you will get out of your trouble.
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