假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Ù），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及修改均限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
The winter holiday are coming, that makes me excited. I have been looking forward at relaxing myself. I'd like to go skating, climb mountains and see several movie. I think I can play the basketball with my classmates. How a wonderful time I'll have during the winter holiday! However, my parents think different. They don't want me go out. They are afraid I'll be knock down by a truck or fight with others. Besides, they are afraid I will lose my way. I hate being treated like a bird in a cage. To get more freedom, I will try to persuade him.
第二节：短文改错（共10小题，每题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：
每行只有一个错误，请按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Fishing is my favorite sport. I often fished for 81________________
hour without catching anything, but this doesn’t worry 82. ________________
me. Some fishermen are unlucky, instead catching fish, 83. ________________
they catch old boots or rubbish. But I’m even less luck. I 84________________
never catch everything—even old boots after 85. ________________
spend a whole morning on the river. So I always go home 86. ________________
with empty bag. “You should give up fishing,” my friends 87. ________________
say, “It’s a waste time.” But they don’t realize one 88. ________________
important thing. I’m not real interested in fishing. I’m 89 ________________
only interested in sitting in a boat and do nothing at all. 90. ________________
第二卷
写作(共两节，，满分35分)
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错的词下画一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
My brother Tom was very selfish when he was a little boy. He did not want share things with other people. For 76. _________ example, when he bought a chocolate cake, he put them 77. _________in a secret place that I couldn’t find. Then he 78. _________ ate it all by himself. He never helped other. 79. _________ He said he is busy. That is, a game of 80. _________ tennis making him very busy. He did not care 81. _________ if something he did makes people angry. For 82. _________instance, on one night he played strong and 83. _________ loudly music till four o’clock in the morning. But 84. _________he is difference now. He often helps grandma with 85. _________housework, helps mom with cooking and helps his classmates with their lessons.
第四部分写作（共两节，满分20分）
第一节短文改错（共10小题，满分5分）
| In order to go diving, you need some equipments. First divers carry their backs a metal bottle, which is filled of water. There’s enough air in it to last about 40 minutes. Next, divers carry heavy metal weights in a belt around its bodies. With these heavy weights they would float to the surface. You see, there are a lot of air in their air bottles, and this will bring them up to the surface if they didn’t have any more weights. Mostly divers don’t go very deep. |
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改错
Bob told me that he would like to be lawyer when he was at school. He had worked very hard at his lessons and tried to enter into a famous university, but something unhappily happened to his family, that made it necessary for him work for a living. As a young man, he had been a bus-driver, a dust-man or a salesman. But he spent his spare times studying and finally become a college teacher. “Young people,” he often said, “full of wishes and hopes after they step into society.”
第Ⅱ卷（共35分）
第四部分 写作（共两节；满分35分）
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边的横线上划（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多与的词用（／）划掉，在该行的右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行错一个词：在错词下划一（－），在该行的右边横线上写出改正后的词。
Dear Mr. Brown ,
I am writing to thank you with your kind help. 76_______
Before you came to teach us , I had not interest in 77_______
English .My pronunciation was terribly. I could 78_______
Only speak a few words. But one and half year later , 79_______
I now think English fun to learn . I got a lot from your 80_______
encouraging words. I will always remember what you 81_______
said , “ If you try to , you can be No. 1 !” I hope you’ve 82_______
had pleasant journey home and will come to China 83_______
again sometimes in the future. I will write again 84_______
and send you the photos we take together . 85_______
Yours sincerely ,
Li Min
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