假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删减或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号，（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多着(从11处起)不记分
My hair was used to be very long.I dreamed of donating it to sick children which had lost their hair. My teacher has donated her hair, so I wanted to donate mine, either. My dream came true last Christmas. After I told my teacher I was ready donate my hair, she praised me. Then we paid the visit to a hairdresser.The hairdresser cut 20 inch from my long hair and styled what was left. It was hard to say good-bye to my hair, so to help others made me feel happily. Now some of my friends are growing their hair long so that they can donate them this year.
短文改错（共10分）
如无错误, 在该行右边横线上划一个勾(√); 如有错误(每行只有一个错误), 则按下列情况改正:该行多一个词: 把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。该行缺一个词: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 在该行右边横线上写出该加的词.该行错一个词: 在错的词下面划一横线, 在该行右边横线上写出改正的词.
During the summer holiday, I think I should do something 1.__________
meaningful instead touring. So I got a job at a fast food 2.__________
restaurant and worked there as cleaner. I worked 7 hours a day 3.__________
for three weeks. The job was hard and bored and seemed endless ， 4.__________
that made me so tired that I nearly stopped it halfway. 5.__________
After all, I stuck to it with determination. Every day I started 6.__________
off for work early in the morning and went to home late in the 7.__________
evening. Finally, I finished the job after the new school term 8.__________
began. Now, I understand that labor means. I think it is really 9.__________
a successfully experience, which is worth remembering for ever. 10.__________
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断，如无错误，则在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（╲）划掉，在该行右边的横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词；在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边的横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下画一条横线，在该行右边的横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Get a good education is more important today than 76．____________
ever before. In Canada mostly children attend public 77．____________
schools. Public schools are mainly found by governments 78．____________
through tax income. Students in Canada taught in 79．____________
English and in French. The rest of Canadian children 
80．____________
attend private schools, what are supported mainly by fees 81．____________
paying by parents. By law, the children must attend 82．____________
the school from age 5 to 16. There are several different 83．____________
levels in the Canadian education system.The first was 84．____________
called Elementary Schools, which include kindergarten 85．____________
through grade 7 or 8.
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如
错误，在该行右边横线上划一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下面划一横线，在
该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
I often dream of being teacher. I dream of standing on the 1. _________
platform in the classroom and give lessons to lovely boys 2. __________
and girls. I teach them, play with them, watch them 3. __________
growing up. I am always young when I was staying 4. __________
with them. I know there is not easy to be a teacher. I 5. __
________
have to learn in order to teach. Without much knowledges, 6. __________
I can never teach wonderful. What is more, I have to 7. __________
be the friends with my pupils and take good care of them. 
8. __________
Only by this way can I be a good teacher and win 
9. __________
respect from them. Though I am a student now, I 10. __________
will work very hard to make my dream come true.
短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分,满分10分)
下面短文中共有10处错误,每句最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧）,并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处,多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last week, I met a stranger who seemed to be losing. I offered to guide him to a
place where he wanted to go, but to my surprise, he refused my offer to helping. I asked
him why not. He told me that he was afraid I would ask him money if I helped him in
this way. Then I fell into deep thought: Was it money that came between us? I agreed
that money is become more and more important in our society, and it should not be
everything. We should try my best to help others and trust each other. If everyone
does this, our society will be good and better.
下面短文中共有10处错误，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分
I often quarrel about my mother over whether I can watch TV after school. She holds view that senior three students have to make fully use of every minute to work hard at their lessons. It seems to me that once I am allowed to do that, I’ll unable to control myself and forget all about my study. She also thinks it is bad for my eye. But I really can’t accept her ideas. In my opinion, watch TV can set my mind at rest after a day’s hard works. Besides, it is important for us to know what had happened at home and at abroad. Thus, we shouldn’t be forbidden to watch TV.
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