假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：把缺词处加一个漏符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now.
I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.
第Ⅱ卷（共35分）
第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节：短文改错（共10小题，满分10分）
以下标有题号的每一行均有一个错误，请找出，并按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,在该行右边横线上写出该加词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
My classmate, Joseph, is at present in hospital
With a breaking leg. He was walking to school the other 76.
day when he let a bicycle ran right into him . He never 77.
watches where he is going, so he often gets into the trouble. 78.
So he is having a nice time there. He has a comfortable 79.
room, patiently nurses, and a great deal of time to read. 80.
Some friends of his go to see him every day, they take him 81.
lots of good book and fresh fruit. He is not losing any time 82.
from school because he is busy study what he has 83.
missed in classes. The doctor says he is recovering fast than 84.
expected and will be out of hospital a few weeks. 85.
第二节：短文改错(满分10分)
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不给分。
I live in a very old town which is surrounding by beautiful woods. It is a famous beauty spot. In Sundays, hundreds of people come from the city to see our town and to walk through the woods. Visitors have asked to keep the woods clean and tidy. Litter baskets have been placed under the trees, and people still throw their rubbish everywhere. Last Wednesday, I go for a walk in the woods. That I saw made me very sad. I counted seven old cars and three old refrigerators. The litter basket were empty and the ground was covered with pieces of paper, cigarette ends, old tyres, empty bottles or rusty tins. Among the rubbish, I found a sign which was said, “Anyone who leave litter in these woods will be prosecuted(依法处置)!”
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
Many years ago, I step into a bookstore for some 76．
books I wanted them. While I was there, I saw a young 77．
boy of about 12 came into the store. The boy wanted 78．
to buy a geography book. Geography books paid 79．
one dollar every, but he had only 62 cents. I decided 80．
to follow him to see whether he could succeed. Four 81．
stores we entered, and four times he disappointed. 82．
Luckily at the fifth store he got an used book for 50 83．
cents. Having learned why he wanted the book, and 84．
the bookseller gave him some writing papers and a 85．
new pencil as a gift.
短文改错（共10处错误，每错1分，满分10分）
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Some students don’t like talking about their parents often as if their parents love them very much. Are you going on well with your parents? You and your parents will be very happily if you can be friends. Here are some way to have a good talk with them. Find a good time to talk, like when you’re eating dinner, going out for walk and watching TV. Tell them something you’re interested in, or ask them about their lives when they are young. They love to talk about our past! Meet them face to face and listen to them carefully. Be honesty, and your parents will trust you more.
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
如无错误，在该行右边横线上划一个勾（√）；如有错误，则按下列情况改正：该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边写出改正后的词。
Two years ago I went to America and study at a language 76.
school. I had many wonderful experience , but I also 77.
had a sad one. One day, the school held a party, in that 78.
I invited to talk about Handan. After that they asked me a lot of 79.
things about China. But I couldn’t explain to him in English 80. 
clearly. I felt sadly. I learnt a lesson from this experience. I 81.
have already studied English for eight years, so I can’t use it 82.
very well. I must work hard to improve my speaking English 83. 
so that I will not be able to communicate freely with foreigners. 84.
I hope I can be a bridge between China and other countries 85.
in the future.
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