Dear Brad ,
I am a boy in the first grades of a senior high school . I feel uneasily recently . At home I feel like prisoner . I am not allowed to watch TV or surf the Internet . The only thing I have to do it is studying . Every time I got a low mark , my parents will scold me sharply . There's a generation gap among my parents and me , but it's always difficult to communicate . Life are supposed to be colorful and wonderful , isn't it ? How should I devote all my time and energy to the study so as to entering a good university ? I am very unhappy and lost . I need your help .
Best wishes ,
Li Ping
假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
June 12, Sunday
Today is Sunday. I didn’t get up early as usually. In the morning after I finished my homework, I do some washing. Then I telephoned one of my classmate and invited him to see a film.
And unfortunately, when we got to the cinema at 3:00 pm we found all the tickets had sold out. Then we went to our school and played the football. Later, we were about to go home when we saw our English teacher, Mr. Wang, came through the school gate. He told us we had made many progress in English this term. He also suggested that we read more and wrote more. We promised to him that we would follow his advice.
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加，删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线（_），并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Today is Mother’s Day. I love Mother too much that I’ve done many things for her.
In the morning I bought many flowers with pocket money and put it in the vase as soon as I returned to home. In the afternoon I went to the market to buy different kind of vegetables and cooked a simple and delicious dinner for my family. After supper, I gave Mother the card that I made by myself and said “Happy Mother’s Day” to her. Then I tell her to pay more attention to her healthy and not to overwork. I also promised to help her do some housework from today on. Hear the words, Mother moved to tears.
Today is the special day, warm and meaningful.
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加，删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线（_），并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Today is Mother’s Day. I love Mother too much that I’ve done many things for her.
In the morning I bought many flowers with pocket money and put it in the vase as soon as I returned to home. In the afternoon I went to the market to buy different kind of vegetables and cooked a simple and delicious dinner for my family. After supper, I gave Mother the card that I made by myself and said “Happy Mother’s Day” to her. Then I tell her to pay more attention to her healthy and not to overwork. I also promised to help her do some housework from today on. Hear the words, Mother moved to tears.
Today is the special day, warm and meaningful.
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√)，如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉；
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词；
该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线,在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Why do we go to university? Different
people had different
views. Some students have many dream and regard
universities 
as best places to realize their dreams. They
think that good jobs and high pay will be from an
university education. So when they enter the university, maybe they
find the university life disappointed. After graduation, many
of they will find the jobs aren’t the ones they like and
the pay is not as higher as they expected. I think that
universities provide good chances for those who are eager to
learn more knowledge so that they can serve for their motherland better.
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
I saw an accident happened on my way to home this afternoon. A girl was crossing the street on a zebra crossing while a young man drove a motorbike towards her. The young man saw the girl and tried to stop, and he drove too fast to stop. He hit the girl and fell off her motorbike. The girl was badly hurt and couldn’t move. The young man didn’t know how to do. I ran to a phone box nearby and dialed 110. Soon the police reached. They sent her hospital at once. One of the policeman talked to the young man and wrote something down while talking. I think it is real dangerous to drive very fast.
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