假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I am a high school student. A few days before one of my very good friend told me that he was going to stop school. He said that he wanted to start his own’s business. I tried my best to get him to change his mind and failed. I realized it was difficult of me to change his mind. He is not doing so good in his studied. The process are more important than the result. Now there are only 90 days being left before the test. I am not sure that his decision is right or wrong. I needed your advice.
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。请按下列情况改正：
此句话多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（
）划掉， 在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此句话缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,在该句话右边写出该加的词。
此句话错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该词的下边写出改正后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
One afternoon on April, 1912, a new ship set off from England to America on it first trip. It was one of the largest and best ship at that time. It was cold, but the ship was pleasant and people are enjoying themselves. The next day was even cold. People could see icebergs here or there. It was night, suddenly, the man on watch shouting “look out! Iceberg!" It was too late, a ship hit the iceberg and came to a stop. There that was a very big hole in the ship and water began to come. Slowly the ship started to go down.
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误.对标题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边的横线上划（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉. 此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词.此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词. 注意：原行没有错的不要改.
Last night I was getting ready for the coming examination 56.
when the noise from my neighbor interrupts me. The noise 57.
went on and on. It was too loudly that I could hardly pay 58.
attention to my study any longer. So I went to my neighbor’s houses 59.
and said to him：“Excuse me, would you please turn up the 60.
TV？I’m preparing for tomorrow’s examination.”Hear these 61.
words, his face turned red. But he said, “OK,I will. 62.
I’m very sorry have made so much noise. Just now, the football 63.
game was very wonderful. I was too exciting to control 64.
myself. I won’t do that again. Good luck in the your coming 65.
examination.” After that, I got down to my study.
该文中共有十处错误,每句中最多有两处,错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（ ＼）划掉。
修改： 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改十处, 多者（从第11处起） 不计分。
I like eating fruit and vegetables what are of great benefit to our healthy．Not only do they prevent us from falling into ill, but they help us lose weight．I used to hate vegetables, but follow the doctor’s advice, I gradually kicked the bad habit．Just as an old saying going, “An apple a day keeps the doctor away”．However, there are still many children dislike fruit and vegetables．On contrary, influenced by this or that kind of advertisement, many were crazy about junk food．Consequently, they become weaker and weaker instead of getting strong．In my opinion, we must take action to change them．
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The problem is too difficult for us to solve it.
It was generous for her to give the beggar so much money.
Meetings and appointments take away most of my time.
As melly gas came out from the cracks of the well.
The computer was broke down. It needs repairing.
Andrew as well as Martin and Jim are fond of music.
You’ll regret to have said those words.
In 1983,therewereonly 200 computers connecting to the Internet.
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删减或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last Sunday afternoon, I went to the zoo with Lily. There was lots of people there. I found
a girl cry in the zoo. She was lost and she can’t find her mother. We decided to help her. I try my
best find the broadcasting station in the zoo. On the same time Lily played with her and looked
after her careful there. The little girl stopped crying and played with Lily. At last his mother
came. That made me feel very happily. I thought I really did a good thing. If everyone helps with
each other, the world will become more beautiful.
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