假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下
作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线（ ），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Alexander was a military genius or great explorer. But he also had a great ambition. He wanted to rule a country that people could live in peace with one another. From 330 to 327 BC, Alexander led his soldier east, through Afghanistan and into Central Asia. As he travel, he built more cities. He ordered soldiers, merchants, and scholars from many lands to settle here.
In 326 BC Alexander turned south, into India. But by now his men were tired and weak. They were far home in an unknown land. The soldiers refused to go farther. Unwillingly, Alexander turned back. By 323 BC, he reached for Babylon in Iraq. There he caught fever and died at the age of 33. His country was divided between his generals.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加: 在此处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出修改的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
Grandma Moses was crazy about painting soon before she picked it up and worked hard at it．She painted careful and her works were nice．She first painted only to please oneself, and then began to sell her works with a little money．In 1993, a collector, Louis Caldor happen to see several of Grandma Moses’ work hanging in a shop．He liked them, buying them at once, and set out to look for less．Caldor held a show to introduce the works of Grandma Moses other artists．Grandma Moses, who was world-famous, was died on December 13, 1961, at the age of 101．
第二节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误（每行只有一个错误），按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
My wife and I went to visit the town that we both 81._______
grew up last summer. We hadn't been to there for ten 82. _______
years. First we went to the place where my wife spends 83. _______
her childhood. People there asked us come into their houses 84. _______
and had a cup of coffee. Then we went to see my old 85. _______
neighbor. How a disappointment(失望)! It was all 86. _______
changed. All the old houses I remembered gone and 87. _______
their places were some very modern one. I didn't 88. ________
know some of the people who lived there. 89. _______
But they were friendly to us. We had very good time. 90. ________
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：
在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
I received your letter was dated April l6 the day 76．
before yesterday．All of our family greatly delighted to 77．
learn how you are getting along very well with your 78．
lessons．Time passes quickly．After dozens of days, you’ll 79．
finish the middle school．What pleases us most is that you 80．
do very well to make up your mind to enter for the college 81．
entrance examination this summer．What wonderful it is ! 82．
Dad, as well as Mom and I, is with you．We wished 83．
you to make better use of your time．The full preparations 84．
you make, the surer of success you’ll certain be． 85．
第二节：短文改错（共10小题，每小题1．5分，满分15分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
My classmates and I worked as volunteer in Beijing 76．____________
Paralympics in September 13．Early in the morning at 7:20, 77．____________
we gathered at the National Stadium, namely the Bird’s Nest． 78．____________
Then we got into it and ten minutes late, we started to do 79．____________
some cleaning．From 9:00 am to 4:00 pm, we tried our best help 80．____________
the disabled athletes to get ready for their competitions, leading the 81．____________
audience to their seats and keep order．It was until 12:00 that we 82．____________
had lunch and took a rest, which last about an hour．We stopped 83．____________
working at 4:00．Though it was a tired job, we felt 84．____________
that it an honor to serve the disabled friends from all over the world． 85．____________
短文改错(共10小题，每小题1分，满分10 分)
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边
横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词；把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错的词下画一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意；原行没有错的不要改。
Did you enjoy yourself yesterday? I suppose you do. 76.
But I had a very terrible day yesterday. Everything 77.
went wrong. In the morning, your alarm clock didn't ring, so I 78.
woke up late. I was in such hurry that I burnt my hand when 79.
I was preparing breakfast. Then I ran out the house to catch 80.
the 8:30 bus. That was the bus I normal took. I missed it. I was 81.
worried so my teacher hated the students coming late to 82.
school. As a result, I ran three mile to school. When reaching 83.
to the classroom, I found all the classmates were in the 84.
classroom and I felt ashamed. How a bad day it was! 85.
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