文中共有10处语言错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
v 增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
v 删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
v 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
v 注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
Dear Mr. Brown,
I am writing to thank you with your kind help. Before you came to teach us, I had not interest in English. My pronunciation was terribly : I could only speak a few words. But one and a half yeas later, I now think English fun to learn. I got a lot of from your encouraging words. I will always remember what you said, “ If you try to , you can be No.1 !” I hope you’ve had pleasant journey home and will come to China again sometimes in the future. I will write again and send you the photos we take together.