假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文,文中共有10处语言错误,每句最多有两处.错误涉及一个单词的增加,删除和修改.
增加:把缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误极其修改均限一词.
2.只允许修改10处,多者从第11处不记分.
Dear Jin Jing,
Your problem is common one among middle school students．Maybe the following advices can help you．First in all, believe in yourself．Your greatest problem is that you lack self-confidence．The first thing you must do it is to smile at your classmates．One smile speaks loud about your wish to make friends than any words．Your smile will show that you are friendly to him．Next, trying talking with a student who is as shy as you or who share the same interest with you．You can discuss your studies with a classmate and you can also talk about your hobbies．Unless anyone is in trouble, you should be ready to help him or her．Once you have confidence, you can make as many friends as possibly．
Yours,
Lily
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
添加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词汇的下面画一横线（__）,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。2.只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。
On the first day when I went to high school, I felt exciting．After 9 years’ study, I felt I was so closely to university．During the first year, I made many friends．I got to know all of my classmates．Because the school work was tough, I shared happiness and sorrow for my friends．When second year came, I was arranged to other class．I was worried that no one could talk to me, but I made new friends quickly．Now it was the last year of my high school life, but I'm determined to study harder and make a greater progress．High school life is challenging for me, but I won’t give out．
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除和修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
With the summer vacation came around，many school leavers feel it great chance to enjoy themselves．Most of my classmate have plans to travel，which can broaden their views and add up to their life experience．There are also some students who would like to work for volunteers in the communities．Besides，quite a few students want to learn to drive，dance or cook with attending summer classes．As for me．I am looking forward to spend this precious time with my family before I left for my college．Hopeful，I can do something in return for our parents’ love and care．
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线（__），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last Sunday morning，when I was having a walk in the park near my home，I came across a crew make a new film with one of my favourite actor．I didn't have my camera with me at that time，but I rushed back to home to get it．Fortunately，by the time I got back，they have finished the scene and the actor couldn't be seen anywhere．I was really disappointing and about to leave when he walked out a building．He was right there in front of me! I couldn't believe my luck - not only did I had my photo taken with him，but he signed his name in my shirt!
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Smile is a magic language that everyone can easily understand whenever he or she comes from．Smile is as the golden sunshine that brings warmth to people and makes him happy．Smile is shortest distance between people and it is a good way to show off friendliness to others．More important，smile conveyed a kind of positive energy to people．When you are happy，smile brightens your face．When you feel frustrating，you should also smile to cheer yourself up．Smile can give you confidences and make you strong．Smiling at the world and the world will smile back!
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(
)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Today is Sunday． I've been in Russia for two months． This is the first time that I've been away my family for such a long time． With the help of Annie， a roommate of me， I soon get used to live without my parents around． Annie， like many other Russian girls， are nice and lively． We became friends shortly after we met each other． Although his English is a little hardly to understand， we enjoy chatting and we usually talk a lot about our friends． We're both surprising that Chinese culture and Russian culture were so different． Now，we are planning a small party for the next Sunday． There，Annie will introduce me to some of her friends， one of who has been to China several times．I just can’t wait．
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