假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文,文中共有10处语言错误,每句最多有两处.错误涉及一个单词的增加,删除和修改.
增加:把缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误极其修改均限一词.
2.只允许修改10处,多者从第11处不记分.
Dear Jin Jing,
Your problem is common one among middle school students．Maybe the following advices can help you．First in all, believe in yourself．Your greatest problem is that you lack self-confidence．The first thing you must do it is to smile at your classmates．One smile speaks loud about your wish to make friends than any words．Your smile will show that you are friendly to him．Next, trying talking with a student who is as shy as you or who share the same interest with you．You can discuss your studies with a classmate and you can also talk about your hobbies．Unless anyone is in trouble, you should be ready to help him or her．Once you have confidence, you can make as many friends as possibly．
Yours,
Lily
第Ⅱ卷（共35分）
第四部分：写作(共两节，满分35分)
第一节：短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分，满分10分)
此题要求改正短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上划一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Dear Li Hua,
It's time to recall those beautiful days when we 76.
spend together. You are the very person who gives 77.
me a hand when necessary. You are the most considerable 78.
person who knows exactly that I need. 79.
Still remember that night two years ago? When I suddenly 80.
fell ill, it was you carried me on your back to a nearby 81.
hospital. You took well care of me while I was having 82.
a injection. Later, you managed to help me with my lessons. 83.
Without your help, I would failed in the exam. 84.
I still have thousand of blessings for you. May all 85．
your dreams come true!
Yours,
Jane
VI.短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉, 在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
When World War II broke out, Disney joined in 81.____________
the Red Cross (红十字会)and went to France , there 82.____________
he stayed until the war over . After the war, he 83.____________
returned Kansas to work for the only company 84.____________
where made fairy story cartoons . This was 85.____________
the kind of wor
k he likes best . He determined to 86.____________
find better ways of making the cartoons moved 87.____________
so that the cartoon characters (卡通人物)will seem alive. 88. ____________
Later he joined his elder brother, Roy, in Hollywood, 89. ____________
California. There they soon put up their own company. 90.____________
短文改错(共10小题，每小题1.5分，满分15分)
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Dear Miss Brown,
We have received your application last week. We regret 76. ______
to inform you that our company has hired other girl for 77. ______
the job of secretary. Having careful studied your certificate, 78. ______
we have decided that we need someone with more office’s 79. _____
experience for this particular position. You have impressed 80. _____
us, but, with your desire to learn and your ability to work 81. ______
hard. We hope that you will apply for position with our 82. ______
company some times in the future. We would like to 83. ______
thank you for your interesting in our company. Please 84.______
contact to us if there are further questions. 85.______
Yours sincerely,
John smith
第Ⅱ卷（非选择题，共35分）
第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节 短文改错 (共10小题; 每小题1分, 满分10分)
英语课上，老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下小短文为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改。短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧ ），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
3．必须按答题要求做题。否则不给分。
The Mid-autumn Festival, that is one important traditional festival in China, falls in August 15th of the lunar calendar every year. It was celebrated both in China and many Asian country. People believe that a full of moon is the symbol of reunion and good luck. This is also a custom to express best wishes to their beloved ones at this particularly time. On that day they usually go back home to have a family get-together, so they appreciate the beautiful full moon, enjoyed the typical food—the moon cake. All Chinese have wonderful time at the festival.
以下短文中共有8处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改8处，多者（从第9处起）不给分。
If you are learning English, it is not enough only to keep in mind the rules of grammar. Try to
read stories in English and speaking English wherever you can. When you have learned how
use the language, you are sure not to fail in the test. A few day before the exam, you should go
to bed early. Don’t stay up late at night study. After you understand the exact meaning of each
question, we should not pick up your pen to write. When you have finished your paper, to be
sure to read over your answers, correct the mistakes you could see and make sure that you
haven’t missed anything.
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