假定英语课上老师要求同桌交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有十处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除，或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出改正后的词。
注意：每处错误及修改均仅限一次;只允许修改10处，多者从第11处起不计分。
One day I had happened to find a chatting room in my QQ, there people were chatting in
English . I tried to chat with any of them . To my surprise , I found the oral English of some
junior students were better than me. I asked them for advice but they told me practise
more on QQ. So every day after that I would spend o
ne hour practise my oral English on QQ.
Day by day I le
arned many useful words and expressions. With time went by, I found that I
could even communicate with some college students free.
下列短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下边写出该加的词；
删除：把多余的词用（／）划掉；
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下边写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Li Ling is the only one of the student in our class who have ever been to England. Last summer she is lucky enough to be sent there to study for three months. When she arrived in England by plane, she was picking up at the airport by the Johnson family, she would live with for the next few months. The family does everything they could do to make Li Ling to feel at home. Li Ling began her study abroad at a 
middle school, where she met friends from all over world. She made fully use of every minute to practice her
spoken English and was better thought of by all the people around her.
短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加﹑删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词的下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计。
I still remember how nervously I was on my first day in the new school two years ago，
when I found difficult to follow my teacher in the first English class. The teacher spoke
English throughout the class, that was totally different from lessons I had taken before.
In the morning class the next day, the English teacher came to me while I am reading the
text aloud.After listen to me for a while,
she gave me a big smile and said he liked my voice
very much．The smile shone on the whole day and the following days．A week later, I was
volunteered to take charge of English study in my class．Thank to the comforting smile in my
first morning class, I began to confident．
下列短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下边写出该加的词；
删除：把多余的词用（／）划掉；
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下边写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Li Ling is the only one of the student in our class who have ever been to England. Last summer she is lucky enough to be sent there to study for three months. When she arrived in England by plane, she was picking up at the airport by the Johnson family, she would live with for the next few months. The family does everything they could do to make Li Ling to feel at home. Li Ling began her study abroad at a 
middle school, where she met friends from all over world. She made fully use of every minute to practice her
spoken English and was better thought of by all the people around her.
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误, 在该行右边横线上划一个勾（√）, 如果有错误（每行只有一个错误）, 则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉, 在该行右边横线上写出该词, 并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线, 在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Dear Mr. Li,
I am one of your mobile newspaper user. I know your _________
mobile newspaper is a first English mobile newspaper _________
that is designed teenage readers in China. It is very ________
popular among teenagers. You had provided a good service for _________
teenagers. Every day, we are able to receive the late English _________
news and stories from the mobile newspaper, which make . ________
it convenient for teenagers to learn English. However, I ________
wonder that you can add some new columns (栏目) we _________
teenagers are interested in them. We will appreciate being _________
able to reading more in such columns. _________
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
下列短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下边写出该加的词；
删除：把多余的词用（／）划掉；
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下边写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Li Ling is the only one of the student in our class who have ever been to England. Last summer she is lucky enough to be sent there to study for three months. When she arrived in England by plane, she was picking up at the airport by the Johnson family, she would live with for the next few months. The family does everything they could do to make Li Ling to feel at home. Li Ling began her study abroad at a 
middle school, where she met friends from all over world. She made fully use of every minute to practice her
spoken English and was better thought of by all the people around her.
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