五．改错
Bob told me that he would like to be lawyer when he was at school. He had worked very hard at his lessons and tried to enter into a famous university, but something unhappily happened to his family, that made it necessary for him work for a living. As a young man, he had been a bus-driver, a dust-man or a salesman. But he spent his spare times studying and finally become a college teacher. “Young people,” he often said, “full of wishes and hopes after they step into society.”
下面短文中有10 处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个的单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10 处，多者（从第11 处起）不计分。
例如：
I remember how I used to playing outside with my friends during my childhood. We always had a great fun. We played many games in them we had to use our imagination. Playing those games, we learned how to compete, organize groups and be creating. We made up of many games that didn't have to be played with specific toys. Now, the situation is differently. Children are still playing, and instead of playing outdoors, they are playing indoors with high-tech toys. This mean they are staying inside the house all the times, and usually in front of a TV. So they are becoming more lonely and making less friends.
When I was in high school, most of my friend had bicycles. I hoped I could also have it. One day I saw a second-hand bicycle, that was only one hundred yuan. I asked my father the money. But he said he could only give me half of the money. He should find the other half myself. So I went to sell newspapers after the school. My father was pleasing when I showed him the money a month after. He gives me the other fifty. You can imagine how much happy I was when I rode to school on my own bicycle.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该词下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（
）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分
Friends are very importance to teenagers. They gave fun and excitement to each other. They also give advices to one another. They can talk about lots of problems with their friends. As for parents, they are sure important. But some teenagers often says their parents don’t understand them. In large families, brothers and sisters often argue each other for good things, such as delicious food or super toys. Because most teenagers think friends are the most important people in their lives. It is very important for teenagers to have one friend and group of friends. As for the reason, it is may be because we can discuss some private things with their friends.
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线（__），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Three friends and I was driving on a highway. While we were going at least 50 miles per hour, we passed over a car. It had broken down, stopped on the side of the road. My friend slows down, and pulled behind the other car. He got out of the car immediate and before I knew it he was helping the other person push the car down the road to a spot where wasn’t so close to the passing cars. From the way they were pushing the car, it looked as if my friend was pushing them all by himself. I thought my friend help a complete stranger like this was a great thing, but I won’t forget his good nature or character.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：把缺词处加一个漏符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last Sunday morning, when I was having a walk in the park near my home, I came across a crew make a new film with one of my favourite actor.
I didn't have my camera with me at that time, but I rushed back home to get. Unfortunately, by the time I got back, they have finished the scene and actor couldn't be seen everywhere. I was really disappointing and about to leave
when he walked out a building. He was right there in the front of me! I couldn't believe my luck-not only did I had my photo taken with him, but he signed his name on my shirt!
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