第四部分写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分,满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你的同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号，并在其下写出该词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
The first time I went to swim was from about 5 years ago. Many friends could swim well and they often laugh at me. So I decided to swim as well as we did. One summer afternoon, the weather was amazed, so I thought it was good for swimming. Thus, I came to the pool but found many boys were already there. I was afraid and did not know what to do. Just as I was wondering, I felt somebody give me a push and I was dropped. Frightened in the water, I wouldn’t help crying. “Help, help! ” I heard some laughter from opposite side. I tried to keep myself balance, only to find the water was just a little above my knee.
第二节：短文改错（共10题，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。短文中共有十处错误，仔细阅读并改正。改正方法如下：
句中多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉；句中缺一词：在缺词处加一个添字符号（∧），并在句子下方写出需要添加的词；句中有错词：在错的词处下划一横线，并在下方写出正确用词。第十一处开始不得分。如：Do you knew a man who have has w
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When tea and coffee was first introduced to Europe in the 18th century, people thought they were harm. So the king of Sweden decided to find whether it was true or not. It was happened that there were two brothers whom were in prison then. The king ordered one of them to drink tea every day and the others coffee. All of them have lived many years. At last the one who had to drink tea every day died in the age of 83 and the other lived much long. Therefore Sweden is today one of the country where many tea and coffee are drunk.
VI. 短文改错
找出下面一段文章中的错处并改正。如该行缺一词，在文中缺词处标上“ ” ，并在相应的横线上写上正确的词语；如该行多一词，在文中用斜线划掉多余的词，并在相应的横线上写上该词，用斜线划去；如该行错一词，在文中用横线标出，再在相应的横线上写上正确的词语。如该行无错，在相应的横线上打上“ ” 。
示例：
Betty wants to be nurse and works with sick people a
who need her helps. help 
Last summer Betty had broke her leg. had 
The pain was very great and she couldn’t walk.
The telephone rang and I picked out the receiver(话筒). “Hello,” 69.____________
I said. “Hello,” said the voice. “Bill here, is Betty there?” 70.____________
“I’m sorry,” I said, “You have got the wrong number.” 71.____________
A few seconds late, the telephone rang again. Just 72.____________
as I expected he was Bill, “You have made a mistake again.” 73.____________
I explained. The telephone rang a third time. This made I 74.____________
angry. I speak in a big voice, “Hello, Bill, Betty here.” 75._____________
For a moment there was a dead silent. Then someone said, 76._____________
“What’s the wrong with you, Tom?” It was my mother. 77._____________
I could do anything but say sorry to my mother. 78_____________
| I had a interesting dream last night.I dreamed |
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| of I took part in a race.At first,I could not run very |
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| fast and fell behind.So I didn’t lose heart and kept |
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| running.All the students on the playground cheer me on, |
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| “Come on!”I was too encouraged that I ran faster and faster |
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| till I caught up with all the other runners.I felt as if to flying like |
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| a superman.By the end,I got to the finishing line first. |
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| I won the race.I felt very proud myself.Many of my |
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| classmate threw me up into the air.Just at that time |
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短文改错（每小题1分，满分10分）
Last night, I have a strange but interesting dream. On the way back home. I came across child from another planet. His clothes seemed to be shining and looked beautifully. As I got close to him, he looked frightening and turned his back to me. Though I couldn’t speak his language, I used hand gestures to talk about him. A while later, he told me lots of amazing thing on his planet, which made me laughing, but suddenly, he began to cry, and then he explained he had lost his way but couldn’t find his home. Seeing that, I was offered to help him. His home had a telephone number like ours, so I asked him to call his parents using my phone. Soon before making the call he disappeared.
短文改错(共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分)
注意：没处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
As we all known, the disabled are also important members of our society. Unfortunate, they can not do everything like another healthy people because of their disabilities. We need help from others. As a healthy people, we should show them our sympathy (同情)and help them. We should not make funny of them or ignore them. Just accept them for who they were, and help them adjust to the surrounding. When they fail, we can help them in many way, like saying “never mind” to them, giving them encouragement, or help them face the next challenge. In my view, helping the disabled is the duty of everyone rather than only the government.
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