第四部分写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，也用斜线划掉。该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
I think I am a person who can get on well with an old. 76.__________
So I would like to have a chance to visit to Old People’s 77.__________
Home as a volunteer. I can help them by do some 78.__________
cleaning and other kind of housework. I would like 79.__________
to talk about them. I can sing songs and dance for them, 80.__________
and I can also read books and magazines for them. I 81.__________
would also like to help ill children in the hospital. 82.__________
I can talk them interesting stories and play games with 83.__________
them. In a word, I would like to help people need 84.__________
help. I’m sure I am a kind or useful person. 85.__________
下列每个句子中均有一处错误。请按要求将每个句子中的错误找出来并加以改正。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词的下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.每句只有一处错误。
3.不可改变原句意。The driver ,rather than the passengers are responsible for the accident.
Her brother suggested her to lose weight to keep fit.
Taxi fee was raised because the price of the oil was higher than before.
Much to our surprise, the old man survived from the big fire.
Suddenly the boys found themselves surrounding by some bad boys.
Actually, the manager you think highly is very mean and dishonest.
The waiter told us the meeting will be at the end in ten minutes.
The woman burst into tears for the moment she heard the news .
Though buried deeply down in the earth, the vase was kept well.
He is sure to come next month, which we’ll be free.
下面短文中有10处语言错误，请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Over the past twenty years or so, great changes have been taken place in our life.Taking my family for example. My parents keep in touch with others mainly by sending letters in the past. And now we make long-distance calls at home, Once my parents listened the radio for news and other informations. But now we get to know about the world .by watching TV or surfing the Internet. There is another big change. When my parents got marry about twenty years ago, they lived in a small room crowding with furniture. But now we have moved into a big new three-room apartment. On short, our life has become more comfortably and convenient.
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加.删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
1. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
例如：
My sister saw a lovely cup when shopped the other day. She liked it at once. Then she bent down and picking it up to look at the price on it. As she did this, lots of tea splashed on his T-shirt! I had to try hardly not to laugh at her shocked face! My sister was about get out of the shop as quickly as she could while a shop assistant came over to us. It turned out to be her own cup, that she’d left on the shelf by the mistake. The assistant was clearly as embarrassing as my sister, so I just thought it was funny!
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线（／）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误和修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Steve was ten years old. He was a very good pupil, nor did he like doing his homework. When he did his homework, he always made a lot of mistake.
One day, his maths teacher went over Steve’s homework, see all his answers were right. He was very surprised instead being pleased. He asked Steve to explain what has happened, “ You have got all your answers correctly this time, Steve. Did anyone help you?”
As the matter of fact, Steve’s mother often helped him with her lessons. And that evening, she was not able to because she wasn’t in. So Steve answered, “ No, sir, my mother was busy last night, so I had to do the homework all for myself.”
文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线＼划掉。
修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者从第11处不计分。
Several American students visited our school. Upon our arrival, we gave a warm welcome to them, among them a boy named Tim was to stay with my family for the weekend. I recognized Tim compared him with photo he had sent to me. Tim greeted me and expressed that how excited he felt. When school was over, we took the subway home. My parents prepared a rich family dinner that night and we had enjoyed ourselves so much, eating and chatting. The next day, I act as a guide, showing Tim along the most famous scenic spots in Beijing. Wherever he went, he had some photos take to help him memorize this unforgettable trip to China. The time to say goodbye came when we realized it. I gave Tim a kite as a souvenir.
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