第四部分写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分,满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你的同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号，并在其下写出该词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
The first time I went to swim was from about 5 years ago. Many friends could swim well and they often laugh at me. So I decided to swim as well as we did. One summer afternoon, the weather was amazed, so I thought it was good for swimming. Thus, I came to the pool but found many boys were already there. I was afraid and did not know what to do. Just as I was wondering, I felt somebody give me a push and I was dropped. Frightened in the water, I wouldn’t help crying. “Help, help! ” I heard some laughter from opposite side. I tried to keep myself balance, only to find the water was just a little above my knee.
写作
短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的一下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处
。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
After news spread which the eight-time Olympic gold medalist Michael Phelps used marijuana, a heating discussion took place in our class. Opinions divided on the issue.
Some classmates argued Phelps deserved to be forgiven as he has made a sincere apology to the public and had willing accepted his punishment. What’s more, they argued, we shouldn’t expect him to be perfect just because he is a public figure -after all, he is still a young man during his early twenties. We all make mistake and Phelps is no exception.
However, others disagreed because like a role model, Phelps’s behavior had a bad influence on thousands of our young fans.
As far as I am concerned, his success story can inspire us to be succeed; on the other hand, his scandal is also a lesson for us.
第Ⅱ卷（满分 35分）
第四部分：写作（共二节，满分35分）
第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上划一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Mr．Moore is the teacher whom I respect mostly． 76．
Though he's 34，but he looks very young．He's the 77．
most popular teacher in our school．Comparing with 78．
others he pays much attention to his way of teaching． 79．
He tries various way to make his classes interesting．He 80．
thinks we should know“what” and understand“why”． 81．
So，he always encourages me to think by ourselves． 82．
Therefore，with his help，we all learned how to 83．
settle problems．How a wonderful world of“why” 84．
he lead us to! We all admire Mr．Moore． 85．
第Ⅱ卷（非选择题，共35分）
第四部分写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，共10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误，对标有题号的每一题做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上划对号：如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下面情况改正：
此行多一词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一词：在错词的下面划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
I will share with you a true story happened a couple 76._________
of days ago. One of my classmates bought a bag of snacks 77.__________
from a food store. A few roommates were then invited to 78__________
enjoy snacks. Unluckily, all of then got poisoned and 79__________
had stomachaches with our faces pale. They were quickly 80.__________
sent to a nearby hospital. Doctors examine them and 81.__________
gave them some medicine. They out of dangerous 82__________
soon before taking the medicine. This accident should 83._________
make us to realize the seriousness of the food safety problem. 84.__________
I strongly suggest that the whole society pays more. 85.__________
VII短文改错(共10小题;每小题1.5分,满分15分)
One day, I went to the market and find many 76.
beautiful birds in few cages for sale. I heard 77.
two young men talked.One said,“I caught eight 78.
birds like these on last Sunday, but not a single one 79.
was lively the next morning.” Oh, God! The birds 80.
are being killed. The number is reducing year after year. 81.
Birds, like another animals, are our friends. They eat a 82.
lot of pests and make our nature beautifully. 83.
So we must do something to prevent them killed. 84.
We wish that everyone will care for them. 85.
II. 短文改错（共15分）
如无错误, 在该行右边横线上划一个勾(√); 如有错误(每行只有一个错误), 则按下列情况改正:该行多一个词: 把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。该行缺一个词: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 在该行右边横线上写出该加的词.该行错一个词: 在错的词下面划一横线, 在该行右边横线上写出改正的词.
During the summer holiday, I think I should do something 76.__________
meaningful instead touring. So I got a job at a fast food 77.__________
restaurant and worked there as cleaner. I worked 7 hours a day 78.__________
for three weeks. The job was hard and bored and seemed endless ， 79.__________
that made me so tired that I nearly stopped it halfway. 80.__________
After all, I stuck to(坚持) it with determination. Every day I started 81.__________
off for work early in the morning and went to home late in the 82.__________
evening. Finally, I finished the job after the new school term 83.__________
began. Now, I understand that labor means. I think it is really 84.__________
a successfully experience, which is worth remembering for ever. 85.__________
第二节：短文改错（共10小题，每小题1.5分，满分15分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上划一个勾（√），如果有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
My birthday is coming. Father asked me how I woul
d 76.
want as my birthday present. I told him I need no present but 77.
a party. Father said OK. When I recited the name of my seven 78.
friends I planned to invite, he wondered why his guest list didn’t 79.
include my new neighbor Tom. I told him I didn’t like to be with 80.
a person whom I didn’t know well. And father insisted that I 81.
seize the chance to make new friends. In my birthday, Tom 82.
came besides my seven friends. Very quick we became good 83.
friends. From this I realized give others a chance means giving 84.
myself a chance. It was really unforgettable birthday. 85.
第二节短文改错（满分15分）
Followed yoga (瑜伽) teacher's gentle instructions, Bai Yunuo, 76. ________
15, from the High School Attached to Beijing Normal University 77. ________
tried get each of her p
oses correctly. Bai's school offered 24 78. ________
elective course for Senior 1 students this term and she chose 79. ________
two. It was her first yoga class. "I'm happy what I can learn 80. ______
__
yoga at school. I love dancing so I have some injuries on my 81. ________
knees from which I was a kid. So I decide to try something 82. ________
soft. Simply stretching into different poses make me feel 83. ________
freely and quiet. At the meantime, the music is quite comforting. 84. ________
The class is relaxing after a whole day work." Bai said. 85. ________
第II卷（非选择题,总分35分）
第四部分 写作（共两节，满分35分）
短文改错（共10小题, 每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Generally, we prefer to do things the way we considered to be the best．However, it is important to listen to those who love us and want to give us an advice when we have serious problems in our lives．Parents have gained some life experiences and they know what to act in different situations．That's why we should ask them for help first when they have problems．Therefore, there are moments when we avoid them and don't want to follow them．With time passed, my brother as well as I have realized that our parents are right．Please turn for your parents when in trouble, for they worth trusting and ready to offer help all the time．
第二节短文改错（共10小题，每小题1.5分，满分15分）
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在此处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一个横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从十一处起）不计分。
In my village a lot of children were leaving school for various reason. Some families are too poor to send their children to school, and they have to earn money to support their families. Many parents do not think it useless to send their children to school. They would rather let their children to stay at home .I feel worried this. I think every child should have a chance to go to school .We should pay any attention to the education of children, for we will play an important part in our socialist construction in the future .Ways must be found prevent children from leave off their studies.
四、写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
以下标有题号的每一行均有一个错误，请找出，并按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：请在答题卡上作答。
John stayed up late last night, so while he woke up in the 76．__________
morning, it was already 9 o’clock. He thought, “I was late for 77．__________
school.” Then he got dressed quickly and washed him 78．__________
in no more than ten seconds and hurried into living-room 79．__________
where his mother was preparing for breakfast. Before his mother 80．__________
could say anything, he told her, “Mum, it is too late that I 81．__________
have no time enjoy my breakfast. Good-bye!” With these words 82．__________
he got his schoolbag but ran out. On the way to school, he 83．__________
rode fast. It took him ten minutes, four minutes less than usually, to 84．__________
come to the school gate. To his great surprises, it was closed. “Ha! 85．__________
It is Saturday! How forgetful I am today!”
第Ⅱ卷（非选择题，共35分）
第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节短文改错 (共10小题,每小题1分，满分10分)
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边的横线上划一个“√”如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（╲）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
该行
缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
This summer holiday, I get a chance to teach English 76. ___________
beginners. I experienced life as teacher for the first time. 77. ___________
The students were very small, but I was even nervous when 78. ___________
so many kids stared at me. Fortunately, their warmly welcome 79. ___________
encouraged me. I taught them some letters, sang English songs 80. ___________
and played games with them, fill the classroom with laughter. 81. ___________
But little kid like talking with each other in class, so it was 82. ___________
hard to control the class. As a result, I got a sore throat. Thus, 83. ___________
I found that teaching is cool and exciting, especially that 84. ___________
when you help your students to learn anything with joy. 85. ___________
五、短文改错（共10处错误，每处错误1.5分，满分15分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在此处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出修改的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从十一处起）不计分。
One day Rosa wrote to her friend, who was a doctor, invite him to have dinner with her families. A few days later the doctor wrote back to her but she couldn’t read his writing because the letters were written careless. Then she asked her husband for the help, but he couldn’t read it, too. Then her husband got an idea. He told her that a chem
ist might be able read the doctor’s letter. So the woman went to chemist’s. The chemist in the shop studied the letter for a long time but he gave her a large bottle of medicine. He told the woman she should eat twelve pills a day. Finally Rosa still had no idea whether her friend will come or not.
六、短文改错（满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。文中共有10处语言错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I remember how I used to playing with my friends during my childhood. We always had a great fun. We played many games which we had to use our imagination. By playing those game, we learned how to compete, organize groups, and creative. Now, the situation is differently. Children are still playing, but instead playing outdoors, they are playing indoors with high-tech toys. This means we are staying inside the house all the times, and usually in front of a TV. So they are becoming more lonely, and making less friends.
第二节: 短文改错(共7分)
下面短文中有7处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加，删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）去掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2 只允许修改7处，多者（从第8处起）不计分。
The Story about Growth is my favorite American TV play because it is very interested. The play tells humorous stories that happen in Mr Green’s family. With such stories it make people think about life, but therefore attracts the audience. It is also a window from that we can learn about American society. And there are many meaningful things that worth thinking of, such as the relationship between parents and children in a lot of American family. It is quite different from that in China. The play is very popular. We’d better not to miss the chance to enjoy it.
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