假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
My mom is really concerning with the health of everyone in our families．In order to make surely all of us are in good health，and she makes specific plans for us．For example，every morning，my dad has to have the bowl of egg soup while I had to eat an apple．My dad don't like the soup and I don't enjoy apples．I tell my mom that if we're forced eat things，we may become ill．But he insists on us eating healthy food．Understanding her good intentions，I eat all the food what is provided by Mom with appreciation．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。When cross the street, he was knocked down by a car.
I would be grateful for you if you give me some advice.
We requested him put an end to his speech.
After school, the students went straightly home.
My money has been given out.
She gave me a determination look—the kind that said she would never change her mind.
Buried himself in his research, he didn’t notice the stranger come in.
The earthquake caused great damages to the city.
The selfless doctor devoted his time to rescue the injured.
He broke the law, but he successfully escaped from being punished.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（／）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线（___），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
This morning on my way to school I was deep moved by what I saw outside a bank. An old man was counting his money in the front of the bank. Suddenly a young man came running and knocked him down. To make things bad, his money was lying in all direction. In no time the people around rush to pick the money up while the old man stood there, not know what to do. Surprisingly, everyone gave back the money they had just picked. The old man counted the money again and found that not a single bill was missed. To my great joy, there are now a lot of nice people in your life. It’s true what honesty is more important than money!
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词作斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last weekend we went mountain-climbing. Even the heavy rain in the morning could not prevent us go. Setting off very early, we went along an extreme narrow road, all in high spirits. On every side of the road were green fields and some farm house. We could hear the sound of the rain and our footsteps mixing with our laughter. At noon we reached top of the mountain. That surprised us most was the beautiful scenery there. After having a short rest and sharing the food we had brought it, we started going down. It rained even harder. We are wet to the skin, and we still sang and laughed happily.
Dear Mr. Black，
I’m very thank to you for inviting me to stay with you in the come summer vacation. I have been dreamed of seeing you again so that I can get help from you in my English learning. And I’m afraid I cannot go to your place in this summer. I’ve promised my grandmother, she lives in the country, to spend this summer with her. She misses me too much that I find difficult to refuse her request. I’m busy preparing for my examinations in present. I planned to visit you in winter if it’s convenient to you.
Best wishes.
Yours truly,
Li Ying
文中共有10处语言错误，。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）。并在其下面写出该加的词
删除：把多余的词用（∕）划掉。
修改：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I went out to see the film with my brother after supper .On our way of the cinema ,we meet an American girl name Alice ,who got lost and looked very anxiously. We went up to see that was the matter ,and finally we took him to the hotel .While going there , I told her the great changes that have taken place in our country in the past few years and Alice told us a lot about youth in America .Although we missed the film ,but we felt very happy for we had not only helped Alice get out of troubles also known something about the united States .We see English can strengthen understanding and friendship.
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