假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有5处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改5处，多者（从第6处起）不计分．
During the summer vacation，my parents and I went to Beijing for a trip．On the first day，we visited the Palace Museum and took many pictures at there．On the second day，we went to climb the Great Wall．It is one of the greatest wonder in the world．We saw lots of tourists and learned much information about it under the help of the tour guide，Miss Yang．At last we went shopping in the city centre of Beijing Wangfujing Street．We bought a lot gifts for our friends．
We enjoyed our trip very much．It was an excited experience and I will never forget it．
The Red Cross is an international organization. It provides the number of service with the public, such as care for people, teaching them the knowledge of first aid (急救) and helping people in need.
Mary is a 20-years-oldgirl. His mother is proud of her because of she is a nurse in the Red Cross. As soon as Mary finished school, she joins the Red Cross and trained as a nurse. She was taught that if she meets an accident, she should gave the first aid at once and then send for a doctor. She studies hard and want to be an excellent nurse.
短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）
下面短文有10处错，每处错皆用底线标出，请将正确答案写在右边相应的横线上。（每小题只填一词，不得改变原句意思）
Do you know something about the holiday camps(露营) in
Hong kong? The students in Hong kong used to took part in an English holiday camp in their holidays. And their parents weren’t with them though they are very young. Now they still enjoy taking part in many kind of holiday camps without their parents. Many parents let their children take part in holiday camps in order to learning some practical know ledge in their life. And also learn some knowledge about living skills, science, reading and writing … The more important for the children is to learn to look after himself . Holiday camps in Hong kong are not expensive. Most of families can afford to send their children there for further study, for make their bodies strongly … And the government never charges for them. It saying that students in Hong kong have much knowledge about many things. May be it has something with kinds of holiday camps.
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）（每小题只填一词不得改变原句意思。）
Jim Green, is our English teacher, has been in
China for more than two year. He has been to many
interesting places in Beijing, and he has not yet
been to many others parts of China. Last week he
goes to Mount Emei in Sichuan Province with his
family. Many people like travel by air, but
Jim family think that travelling by train is
the best. It is much cheap and far more enjoyable
than a rushing trip by air. He had a wonderful
train ride to Chengdu after they went to Mount Emei by bus.
选择改错（10 分）
( ) __________1. It’s birthday ison July the fifth, 2010.
A. It’s B.is C.on D.fifth
( ) __________2. Whynotlistening to music in the evening?
A.why B.not C.listening D.in
( ) __________ 3. Mr. Li is my teacher. He teachesmy English well.
A.my B.teachers C.my D.well
( ) __________ 4. Most of uslike living in the flats likes this.
A.most B.us C.like living D.likes
( )___________ 5. Does that calendar belongwithMillie?
A.does B.belong C.with D.millie
短文改错(10分)
One summer evening, I was playing and some childs by a river. We saw a lot of frogs(青蛙) in the water. One of us said, “Let’s to see who can Catch most frogs.” Then we began. After while we caught a lot. We are having a good time when a farmer shouted at us. “Don’t caught frogs!” Then he told us how importance they are to farming. They eat a lot of bad insects(害虫)every year, Caught frogs must be stopped. After hear that, we felt very sorry.
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