假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Recently, the Ministry of Education has issued a requirement which students should be given labor education while at the school, which arouses a heated debate.
As for students, opinion are divided. Some students think that it will be great benefit for their health, enabled them to be well developed. On the other hand, some students hold the view that this kind of education will take up our time, which will be spent studying otherwise. But it will have a negative effect on their grades.
It was true that students are given little chance of laboring nowadays, thus lacking the sense of labor. So as far as I am concerned, students definite should receive labor education so that they will value more that labor brings about.
英语课上,老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下小作文为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
3．必须按答题要求做题，否则不给分。
Dear Mr. Johnson,
I’ve learned from a newspaper that some clerks are wanting in your company. I am
eager to being one of them. So I am writing the letter. My name is zhang Hua. I was
born in the Hebei Province and I am in good health. I’ve just graduated in the Computer
Department of Wuhan University. I did very good in all subjects and I am especial good
at computer studies and English. I can read science books in English and doing some
writing in English as well. Beside, I know a little French. And in my spare time, I enjoy
playing basketball. As is said that your company is very famous and I’ll very glad if you
let me work for it. My telephone number is 027-89276628．I am looking forward to
hearing from you soon.
此题要求改正所给短文中
的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断:如无错误,在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√);如有错误（每行只有一个错误）,则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词:在错的词下划一横线,在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意:原行没有错的不要改。
On May Day, Li Yue and Zhang Hua, student from Class Three, ____
Grade Two, went to Sunshine Nursing Home and do some voluntary ___
work. On their arrival, Li Yue and Zhang Hua were warm welcomed, _____
and respectfully, they presented the elderly with flowers and fruits. ________
Then, they started working once, cleaning the windows and the floor. ________
Everything done, they sat in the yard chatted with the elderly people. ________
When there was time for them to leave, the elderly people thanked ______
them their kindness. They said it was so beautiful a day that they _____
would remember forever. Li Yue and Zhang Hua were very happy. ____
How they did has brought joy to others and enriched their own lives. _____
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该词。
该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Eddie liked music very much. After leaving in __________
a medical college he went to work in hospital. _________
There he found that a lot of patient were happier _________
and caused little trouble if pleasant music was __________
playing to them. So, when he began to work in his __________
office he had a recorder playing beautiful music
to keep his patients happy. A morning soon after __________
the recorder has been played, a woman, who was _________
sitting in the crowded waiting room, she complained, __________
“We’re all waiting here to see the doctor _________
while he just playing the violin in his office _________
instead of doing his medical work.”
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误，对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上划一个(√)；如有错误，则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改!
One day I happened to find a chatting room on the
internet, where people were chatting on English. I tried
to chat with some of them. To my surprised, I found the
fact that the oral English of some junior students were better
than mine. I asked them for an advice and they told me
to practise more on QQ. What I wish I could speak English
as good as these fellows! Therefore every day after that I
would spend one hour practise my oral English on QQ.
Day by day I learned many good and useful words and
expression. With time going by , I found that I could
even communicate with some college students free.
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：每行只有一个错误，请按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（
），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：请在答题卡上作答。
When I was a small child my parents didn’t have many money ______________
and I had a very few Christmas gifts. My cousin was 10 and he _______________
had gone out singing Christmas carols and made quite a bit ______________
money. With telling anyone he went to the shop and spent almost______________
every penny of his money on a teddy bear; then he using the ______________
change to buy a little necklace with a glass charming on them. He _______________
came to my house and told my parents what he had bought these _______________
things for me as Christmas gifts. Twenty-five years late the _____________
moth-eaten teddy bear has long since been thrown away, but I even ____________
have the little rusty necklace in my jewelry box to remind of my cousin’s kindness. ______________
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