短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线(__)，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I was taking a train to London's Victoria Station. I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people.
Before long, a train inspector comes to check our tickets. A passenger realized he couldn't find his ticket but became quite upset. Then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket，which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner. The person who found a ticket smiled with pleasure at his success.
No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticket-owner before. Yet they had so quickly offered the strangers their help. If we could show our concern to others on need，the world would be a better place to live in.
Dear Lihua,
I’m very glad to have received a letter you sent me ______________
two weeks ago. I had been thinking about the question you ______________
asked me. In my opinion, you should come back before ______________
you finish your studies abroad. For one reason, which you ______________
are studying is badly needed nowadays in China. That will ______________
be pretty easy for you to find a good work. In fact, I know a ______________
few big companies in one city is hoping to hire people _____________
like you. For other reason, I think it will be more convenient ______________
for you to look after your parents as they are getting old. _______________
Therefore, I think it’s a good idea for you to return back. _______________
Best wishes!
Minghua
英语课上,老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下便条为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改。便条中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
3．必须按答题要求做题，否则不给分。
When I was in high school, most of my friend had bicycles. I hoped I could also have it. One day I saw a second-hand bicycle, that was only one hundred yuan. I asked my father the money. But he said he could only give me half of the money. He should find the other half myself. So I went to sell newspapers after the school. My father was pleased if I showed him the money a month late. He gives me the other fifty. You can imagine how much happy I was when I rode to school on my own bicycle.
此题要求改正所给文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边的橫线上划一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正。此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（／）划掉，在该行右边的橫线上写出该词，并也用橫线划掉。此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行的右橫线上写出该词。此行错一个词：在错的词下划一橫线，在该行右边橫线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
They day before the speech contest（比赛） English teacher ____________
talked to me . She said that she and my schoolmate all ____________
wished me success , but it didn't matter that I would ____________
win or not . When I was on the stage the next day , I felt so ___________
nervous as I shook like a leaf . There were so many people ___________
present! Suddenly , I caught a sight of my English teacher in ___________
the crowd . She was smiling but nodding at me. I remembered __________
her words and calm down . I did a good job and won the first __________
prize . Now my picture and the prize is hanging in the library. ___________
Whenever I see them I will seldom think of my English teacher. __________
When we got up in the morning every day, we start our daily____________
routine: washing our faces, brushing our teeth and maybe take a bath.____________
When you do this, do you ever think that there is enough water or not?____________
One thirds of the 4.4 billion people in the developing world____________
has no way to clean drinking water. Water-related diseases kill____________
10,000 to 20,000 children every day in the developed world. ____________
What comes to our minds when we read these numbers? ___________
Do you think we are lucky or not? In a fact, the outlook for the____________
future, even for us, is not very bright.
So let us value our water as much as possibly not only for___________
ourselves, but also to our children. ____________
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。短文中有10处错误，每句最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（
）,并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词。
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear editor,
I’m a college student and I’ll graduating in half a year. I’m very worried about my future, because find a good job is so much difficult. At the moment, my parents want me to be a teacher, and I don’t like that idea. During my holiday break, I work part-time as a tour guide in my hometown. I liked job very much. But my parents didn’t agree with me. They thought the work was difficulty, even though one could make a lot of money. That is the most important to me is that being a tour guide won’t take me far from home. I always consider what my parents say, but it’s hard for me to take a decision. Could you give me some suggestion?
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